Hitsugaya Toushirou FC

[Dauragon13]

good one PS

I like it

but it is long the same as matt and I did not read the whole of it but it looks good

[Kataklyzm]

New paragraph! First day of training: Part I

The first day of training had begun. Takashi, staring in awe, was dumbfounded by the appearance Hira Taiyō's manifestation.
"Nobutaka-sama." said Takashi, "This is... Hira Taiyō."
"Yes." said Nobutaka, "Do you not understand?"
"No, I don't." began Takashi, "How is his manifestation possible?"
Nobutaka took another puff of his pipe.
"It's a forces manifestation." said Nobutaka.
Takashi looked sharply at Nobutaka, staring in disbelief. Still, he could not deny what he say with his own eyes.
"The Tenshintai," began Nobutaka, "takes a shinigami's Zanpakuto and it's power, and forces out it's true spiritual manifestation. Traditionally, we enter the world of the Zanpakuto. You probably remember this when you learned your Shikai. But for your Bankia, a new level of harmony between yourself and Hira Taiyō is needed. This process usually takes many years to discover, but the Tenshintai forcibly summons the manifestation of your Zanpakuto into our world."
Takashi was completely overwhelmed by this. As he was about to walk away to Hira Taiyō, Nobutaka gave him one last vital piece of information.
"But, Takashi..." said Nobutaka, "This method only sustains your Zanpakuto for one day over a three day period. Within that time, you must throughly defeat Hira Taiyō, and force his manifestation into submission. Should you fail, the results could be fatal."
Takashi froze in his place. Forcing his movement through sheer willpower, Takashi began to walk towards Hira Taiyō.
"So, Hira Taiyō," said Takashi, "Do you understand the situation."
"Of course I do." said Hira Taiyō, "Are you ready... to begin?"
Takashi took a deep breath.
"I am."
Hira Taiyō then lifted it's head in the air, and caused a deep-toned roar.
*GGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! !*
As Hira Taiyō roared, several different swords, all appearing to be different released forms of Hira Taiyō's Zanpakuto form, emerged from the ground.
"Listen well, Takashi." said Hira Taiyō, "Many swords have come from the ground. One in among these is the only Zanpakuto that can defeat me, the only one that is my true self. The other ones you see before you are utterly useless. If you desire to achieve your Bankai, you'll have to force me into submission before I am able to get the chance to kill you."
Takashi took another breath, and clinched his fists with determination.
Hira Taiyō continued, "Once you have found it, you must be able to defeat me, by any means necessary."
"I've got it." said Takashi, "so... shall we start?"
Using Shunpo, Takashi ran towards a sword, lifting from the ground. After wielding it in a fighting stance, Hira Taiyō made a loud hiss, and fly upo into the air at a frightening speed. Lunging into the air and down towards the ground, Takashi swung his blade at the flying Hira Taiyō, only to have it shatter from Hira Taiyō large fangs. Falling to the ground, and arming another sword, Takashi prepared to lunge again at Hira Taiyō.
"It's useless, Takashi." said Hira Taiyō
As Takashi was rising towards Hira Taiyō, Hira Taiyō's mouth began to glow a bronze-gold, with distorted air around his mouth. Takashi's eyes bulged in amazement as Hira Taiyō blasted a wide beam of thermal radiation, many times the size and speed of his Retsujitsu Shindou, which were only jets of radiation.
"Gggghhhh!!" said Takashi, trying to defend himself from the attack mid-air. The shockwave from the attack was stronger than anything Takashi had ever felt before. It's power complete dwarfed his own in every way. The shockwave forced Takashi out of the sky, and into a rock cliff. Takashi, now on his back, almost lost consciousness.
"Rise, Takashi!" yelled Hira Taiyō, "It's too early for you for fall now."
Takashi, barely able to move, merely uttered something under his breath.
"Fine then." said Hira Taiyō, "You will... DIE HERE!"
As Hira Taiyō bared his fangs, lunging at Takashi with a loud roar, Takashi, who was "unable to get up", suddenly smiled. Using Shunpo, Takashi leaped for another sword as Hira Taiyō crushed the small cliff remains in his jaws, with much of it melting into molten magma from the intense heat of his mouth. Takashi lifted the sword to the right side of his head, "I'm just beginning."

Okay, that was part one of day one. Each day will have two parts. Hope you liked it. Most of his training will take place mid-air, except when he swoops down to pick up another sword. I want to make good use of Hira Taiyō's wings . Oh, and picture Hira Taiyō like a winged, but legless dragon, around the size of Manda from Naruto. Might help you get a better mental image of how I pictured him.

[sweetyknight]

Awesome paragraph, Kat!^^

[Gaara's Sand]

Whoo, more paragraphs! I'll have to read Matt's PS's and Kat's when I get home from school, because I'm getting ready to leave in about 10 minutes. I'm almost done with my paragraph, I'll probably post it later today or tomorrow.

[Kataklyzm]

We'll be waiting for it!

[Evil Sannin]

oh man I love you all. There is tons...and I mean tons I gotta update and read which is good b/c the story and you all's paragraph are very fun and iteresting so I won't be bored at all, now I just need to find the time to do so.

[sharingangal]

well get on that chop chop evil

[Gaara's Sand]

Whenever you can ES! =)

Very good read Kat! Here's my paragraph now. Yumi took the shortcut instead of telling each person individually, lol.

Yumi walked quickly through the Seireitei. She had just recieved an urgent summons that requested her prescence in Captain Hitsugaya's office, NOW. 'I wonder what it could be about?' she thought worriedly. Her thoughts grew more and more troubled with every passing second, so she picked up the pace.
Yumi was practically running as she flung open the door to Captain Hitsugaya's office without bothering to knock. An ugly image was running through her head consisting of Aizen slaying Yamamoto, conquering Soul Society, and declaring that all shinigami must join his forces or die. Yumi shuddered involuntarily, her dark brown hair swaying gently against her face, and banished the disturbing thought to the back of her mind where it lingered uncomfortably no matter how hard she tried to supress it.
She was surprised to find that Captain Hitsugaya wasn't in his office. Instead, Rangiku was seated behind his desk looking unusually solemn. "Matsumoto-san?" Yumi asked uncertainly. "What's going on? Where's Captain Hitsugaya?"
The blonde woman leaned forward and said in a serious voice "Tryphena ran off to Heuco Mundo in search of her father. The Captain went on ahead and and gave me the task of assembling a group to back him up. It's too big of a job for me to do alone. Since Keisuke and Takashi are both on leave at the moment, I decided to pick you to help me. You have improved your skills greatly by learning Bankai. Are you ready to start?"
"Of course." Yumi said at once. "We have to hurry, Tryphena may be in serious danger. Leave it to me, I'll get the message out quickly." The younger girl led the way outside with Rangiku following close behind her.
With Rangiku watching, Yumi took a deep breath, focused her reiatsu, and began the chant. "Black and white net! Twenty two bridges, sixty six crown strings, footprints, distant thunders, mountain peaks, valleys, night shadows, cloud sea, cyan line! Fill up the circle and zoom to the edges of the sky!" With the Kidou now finished, Yumi began speaking, her voice magnified all over the Seireitei.
"This is Yumi Miyahara, from the 10th Division. We have lost one of our fellow 10th Division members, Tryphena, to the horrors of Heuco Mundo. Captain Hitsugaya has already gone ahead after her. All 10th Division members are to report directly to either myself or Vice-Captain Matsumoto in front of the 10th Division Headquarters. Anyone else wishing to be part of the team sent in to retrieve them should also report immeadiately. We leave in an hour."
Yumi released the Kidou and stepped back to stand by Rangiku. "Now we wait and see who shows up." she said grimly.

[sweetyknight]

Great paragraph, GS! I love it! It 's great to have Yumi back in the story!

[sharingangal]

awesome paragraph gs

[Gaara's Sand]

Thanks Sweety and SG! Yumi's secretly scared that she has to go to Heuco Mundo. She might run into Tea Man. I'd be scared if I saw him too, lol!

[sweetyknight]

You 're welcome, GS!^^ Things are going to get interesting for Tryphena really soon too. I just want to refrain for a bit to collect more ideas and give the others a bit of a chance to catch up on the story. This new Story-Arc is going to be fun!

[Kataklyzm]

Great paragraph, GS. And sk, I'm going to do that for a week or two myself. I need to gather ideas... and I prefer reading people's stuff rather than making it.

[allie]

OK.. so I actually went back 3 pages to read everyone's paragraphs... I would make comments but if I do it individually it will take another 3, so I will just say that you all did a great job and I feel sorry for ES who has to go and put it all into chapters...

[Evil Sannin]

Okay i'm working on updating the story through MS word and i gotta read the new chapters, it will be updated hopefully soon if I can find ch. 3 lol but i will definitely be updated today

[Dauragon13]

I like your paragraph GS

and I hope to see yours soon ES