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Old 26-07-2008, 08:37 PM   #3061
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@ES: When the story gets back on-track, then I 'll post again. I need more ideas. At the rate things were going, Aizen would have gotten his way w/ no one to stop him. =/
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Old 26-07-2008, 08:40 PM   #3062
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i still have 2 characters to introduce...
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Old 27-07-2008, 02:44 AM   #3063
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@ES: When the story gets back on-track, then I 'll post again. I need more ideas. At the rate things were going, Aizen would have gotten his way w/ no one to stop him. =/
lol you're right about that, man that's sad when you look at it that way
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Old 27-07-2008, 02:47 AM   #3064
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aizen winning aint all bad...
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Old 28-07-2008, 07:45 PM   #3065
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But him winning with no threat or any good battles is just too easy for him, we need a desent battle for him
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Old 28-07-2008, 07:46 PM   #3066
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Old 28-07-2008, 08:00 PM   #3067
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yeah I'm at work and usually when it's slow I try to stay on and become as active as possible b/c I really don't get much time to get on at home my family is always together and I love spending time with Jr. if anyone could post the last page the last paragraph the story was written I'll try to start with the next paragraph, don't have too much time to search here at work but i'll try to write some things down on paper and post on my lunch break
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:20 PM   #3068
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:33 PM   #3069
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yeah I'm at work and usually when it's slow I try to stay on and become as active as possible b/c I really don't get much time to get on at home my family is always together and I love spending time with Jr. if anyone could post the last page the last paragraph the story was written I'll try to start with the next paragraph, don't have too much time to search here at work but i'll try to write some things down on paper and post on my lunch break
Awesome! I was the last to post I think. I 'll go back & look for it.
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:33 PM   #3070
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yeah, sweety was the last, and i posted a page before, i think...
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:45 PM   #3071
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Here 's the last 3 I wrote:
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Saiyori 's induction ceremony had went well. He was now the Captain of the 5th Division Squad once again. As soon as the ceremony had ended Captain Yamamoto dispatched hell butterflies to inform all of the Captains and Lieutenants of each squad about the meeting. "Captain Yamamoto has called fourth an important meeting to be held in his quarters. All Captains and Lieutenants are urged to report there immeadiatley."Read the message the butterfly gave. Tryphena had just gotten back from seeing her Father 's ceremony and had so happened to walk right past Yumi, whom was just heading off to meet Captain Kuchiki and Lieutenant Abarai. They both stopped and silently exchanged looks amongst one another. Tryphena turned her gaze downwards at her. She was too ashamed of herself to look her best friend in the eyes. Basil placed his hands upon Tryphena 's shoulders and then fixed his gaze upon Yumi, whom had already went on her way. Suddenly a hell butterfly fluttered towards Basil and Tryphena. She and Basil stopped in their tracks. "A hell butterfly?" Tryphena asked, extending out her right index finger for it to land upon. After the butterfly had delivered the message, Tryphena and Basil started for Captain Yamamoto 's office.

When they both arrived there, they had seen all of the Captains and Lieutenants lined up in two perfect rows besides the left and right sides of the vast office, including Saiyori and Momo. "The meeting will now begin!" Yamamoto exclaimed, motioning Tryphena w/ his hand to stand up front along side him. Basil gracefully followed behind Tryphena, and bowed low to the ground in Yamamoto 's presence with his gaze fixed to the floor when Tryphena got there. Yamamoto began to speak: "Early this after-noon I had been informed by 10th Squad Captain Hitsugaya and Lieutenant Matsumoto that upon stumbling upon a private conversation between Tryphena-San and her Zanpakuto, that the Seireitei 's greatest threat Sosuke Aizen has taken a particular liking towards Tryphena-San. He plans to come and take her back to Hueco Mundo with him. But the time is uncertain when this will take place." A hush fell over the crowd. Momo 's heart had jumped up into her throat at the very mention of Aizen. Yamamoto turned his gaze upon Tryphena. "Tryphena-San...you possess an advantage that no mere Shinigami in all of the Seireitei has, When Aizen returns for you, you must agree to go to Hueco Mundo with him. Your mission is to collect as much information on Aizen 's plans as possible. Since he trusts you, I 'm sure that he will reveal some pieces of information to you." Yamamoto continued.

Basil lifted his head up from bowing and gasped in shock. Yamamoto then looked over at Basil with a look of reassurance upon his face. "Basil will go with you. But he must remain in his sealed form. Basil 's job is to silently gather up the information by quietly communicating with you, Tryphena-San, in your thoughts. Which he will telepathically communicate them back to me." Yamamoto explained. Basil felt at ease since he knew that he was going with Tryphena. "Will you do this for the sake of the Soul Society, Tryphena-San?" Yamamoto asked, looking her directly in her eyes. Tryphena looked back at Basil, who was standing up with a solemn look on his face. And then to her Father, whom gave her a nod of encouragement. Turning back to Captain Yamamoto, Tryphena gave her answer. "Yes. I will." "Thank you, Tryphena-San." Yamamoto replied. "At that, I add, act as you normally do around Aizen. Do not allow him have any suspicions of you what so ever." "Right!" Tryphena answered.
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Late that night, Tryphena had reflected back upon the meeting. Many thoughts had flooded into her mind. Basil had remained in his sealed form, in case Aizen decided to show up. Suddenly, Tryphena heard a voice calling out to her outside of her bedroom door. Tryphena rushed over to the door and flung it poen, but noone was there. She then went back inside of her room, and quickly grabbed Basil, holding him firmly in her hand. She went back outside of the door to her room and into the hallway. Again the voice called out to her, but this time she recognized who the voice belonged to. "Sosuke-Sama..." She whispered to herself, allowing her feet to carry her towards the direction where his voice was. The whole Seireitei felt the enormus spiritual pressure looming over them. Saiyori was the first to respond. Hitsugaya and the others followed along closely behind him. The spiritual pressure had led everyone outside the gates to the Seireitei, where they found Tryphena and Aizen in front of the gates to the netherworld, where upon which GrimmJow and Ulquiorra stood on both sides.

Aizen scoffed at Saiyori. "How touching it is that everyone has came to see you off. Tryphena-Chan...since it 's the last time that they 'll ever see you again." A violent wind began to blow as the gates to the nether world slowly began to open. Tryphena 's pink ribbons loosened out of her hair and Saiyori had caught them in his hand. A chunck of the ground that Aizen and Tryphena stood on began to lift. At that, Aizen quickly grabbed Basil from out of Tryphena 's hand and plummeted him to the ground.
"BASIL!" Tryphena cried out, trying to reach out for him. But it was too late, they were already enveloped in the bright goldish barrier made by the hollows. Luckily Matsumoto had caught Basil. "NO! This can 't be happening." She said looking upwards. "HAHAHA! Foolish little Zanpakuto....ALL OF YOU ARE FOOLISH! I ALWAYS GET WHAT IS MINE!" Aizen laughed maniacly. "TRYPHENA!" Saiyori called out. "Did he know about our plan?" Hitsugaya thought to himself, angrily grinding his teeth.

Tryphena and Aizen were pulled inside the gates along with GJ and Uli behind them. "DADDY!!!" Tryphena called out just before the gates had closed themselves up and disappeared. "No...what have I done?" Hitsugaya said a loudly to himself, wincing in disbelief.
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Soon after the gates to the nether world had closed, taking Aizen, GJ, Uli and Tryphena with them, an uncomfortable silence had fallen across the group of Taichous and Fuku-Taichous that had just witnessed the shocking events. Saiyori held tightly onto Tryphena 's cherished pink ribbons that she proudly tied up her hair in. A look of dispondency formed on his face. Hitsugaya glanced over at Saiyori, whom was still staring up into the sky, hoping that the gates would return and bring his beloved daughter back to him. Even with knowing that it would not happen, deep inside of his heart Saiyori had felt that it was possible he would never see Tryphena again. Hitsugaya formed his right hand into a fist, tightly clenching it out of frustration. He then spoke. "I am sorry Maidoushi-Sama. i know that an apology will not take back what has been done, but I promise that I will return Tryphena back into your arms." He said sternly with a glint of confidence in his eyes. Matsumoto gasped in shock. Captain Yamamoto had then spoke. "Do not play the hero right now, Captain Hitsugaya. This is a team effort. Our plan could still succeed. Tryphena-San is a very smart and courageous young woman. I could sense that as she stood before me at the meeting. So, don 't give up. You neither, Saiyori." Saiyori turned his glance over at Captain Yamamoto and flashed a gentle smile. "Right." He answered. "Even though I am not with Tryphena physically...she and I are still able to communicate, since our hearts are one." Basil spoke as he released himself from Tryphena 's Zanpakuto that Matsumoto had held onto.

On the way to Hueco Mundo, Tryphena had fainted in Aizen 's arms. When she had awakened, Tryphena had discovered that she was in a very large and lavish looking room and that her Shinigami robes had been replaced with a white robe that resembled Aizen 's. "Oh no, Basil!" She called out, sitting herself up on the bed she had been placed on. Suddenly, Tryphena had remembered that Aizen had threw Basil down at her fellow Shinigamis. A single tear had rolled down her cheek as she re-played that memory over again in her mind. Suddenly, the door had opened up. And there stood Aizen in it 's frame. He let himself into the spacious room and walked over to Tryphena , whom sat up on the large bed. "You look stunning in these robes, as I knew that you would." Aizen said to her in a low, seductive rasp, while running his fingers through her long blond hair. Tryphena glanced up at him with a look of sadness. "Why do you look at me with such sadness my beloved? Is n 't this not what you wanted? To be at my side?" He asked her tauntingly, slightly chuckling. Tryphena had shaken off her tears and nodded. Aizen held his hand out to her. "Come now, let me introduce you to my Arrancar." He said. Saying nothing, Tryphena had placed her hand inside of his. They walked out of the room and down the seemingly endless hallways of Las Noches. When they finally arrived at the foot of Aizen 's throne, they found the Arrancars there gathered as expected. Leading her up to his throne, Tryphena had became nervous as the eyes of the Arrancars had focused themselves on her.

They finally came to a stop at Aizen 's seat a top the throne. Looking down at the Arrancar, Tryphena became shocked when she saw Gin and Tousen emerge from the shadows. Tryphena knew exactly who they were. Chills ran down her spine as she looked at Gin. Tryphena grabbed onto Aizen 's robe. "Haha. Do not be afraid of them my dear." Aizen chuckled. At that, he turned himself forward, facing the Arrancars down below. Taking a nervous Tryphena who was still tugging onto his robe with him.
"These are my Arrancar." He whispered to her. On instinct, one by one the Arrancars had introduced themselves to Tryphena. Grimmjow carefully focused his gaze on Tryphena. "Hmph. Why is this Shinigami girl here anyway?" He thought to himself. "Those eyes...I don 't trust them."
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:48 PM   #3072
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ummm, sweety, thats only 1...
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Old 28-07-2008, 09:51 PM   #3073
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That was all one whole paragraph. I just had to break it up into separate parts at the time, since i can 't type fast.
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