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Old 08-12-2007, 09:45 AM   #1001
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Got Dammit nat, you made that Vega set for sweety! I'm mad at you, my skills are sooooo not even close to yours ugh. I'm running away! lol

yeah I don't even want to interfere with what GS and PS <---funny, has left off with the Hollow fight. And thanks for the cool pics GS, now I know I forgot to do something, gotta add all the latest pics to the gallery! I'm so absent minded
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Old 08-12-2007, 10:09 AM   #1002
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Hey, I just realized something. There's GS, ES, and PS. Power of the S's, lol. And SG is me backwards. Ok, I think I should go to bed now, I'm getting delirious or something.
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Old 08-12-2007, 12:20 PM   #1003
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lol yeah b/c I never noticed that...well like I told nat a couple post back...go to bed lol.
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Old 08-12-2007, 01:22 PM   #1004
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na na nana na ES

are we what.... jealous lol
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Old 08-12-2007, 01:57 PM   #1005
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I was writing a paragraph... and Firefox had to close....

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"BOOM!"
Thunder crashed and rain began to downpour. A severely beaten Shinigami laid unconscious on the ground. After a second crash of thunder, the fallen Shinigami, Takashi Jitō, awoke. In tense pain, Takashi stood up, looking towards the dark sky as lightning continued to strike. On the ground by his feet laid his Zanpakutō, stabbed into the earth. Takashi picked it up and held it close to his face, communing and requesting Hira Taiyō to seal and regenerate his wounds. After Takashi sheathed his sword, he began to try and sense any familiar reiatsu in the area. He never did, and he then realized that he was temporarily, though effectively cut off from the others.
"GGGGGGRRRRAAAAAOOOOO!!!!"
With a shattering roar and a burst of reiatsu, on top of a partially shattered roof stood a two-legged salamander-like Hollow.
"Tch." said Takashi, "I guess it can't be helped, can it Hollow?"
Knowing a battle was inevitable, Takashi placed his hand upon his Zanpakutō, but before he drew it, Takashi asked the Hollow one question.
"Before I kill you, tell me, what is your purpose here?"
The Hollow replied, "I have no dealings with Shinigami. Your threat was meaningless."
Takashi glared at the Hollow and spoke.
"I don't make threats, I make promises."
Takashi drew his Zanpakutō and, in a flash of speed, commenced battle with the Hollow, entering into a deathmatch.

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Old 08-12-2007, 05:42 PM   #1006
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Cool paragraph Bend! Glad you could rewrite it.
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Old 08-12-2007, 06:18 PM   #1007
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I'm trying to hurry and finish my paragraph so GS doesn't kill me, lol. I should have it posted later today. NO GS! I SWEAR I'M WORKING ON IT! NOT THE SAND COFFIN! ANYTHING BUT THAT! *runs away screaming*

*sneaks back to say* p.s. nice job on your paragraph Bend! *runs away screaming again*
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Old 08-12-2007, 08:02 PM   #1008
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lol gl on ur paragraph and sweet job bend
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Old 08-12-2007, 09:24 PM   #1009
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Great job on the paragraph, Bend!

LOL @ ES! Vega 's not going anywhere. Maybe you should ask Nat to make you a Chun-Li set.
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Old 09-12-2007, 04:52 AM   #1010
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oooh chun-li yeah I'm gonna have to ask nat later probably after the christmas season *hint hint nat* lol

Nice paragraph bend. uh-oh...is the seireitei being over ran with Hollows, man the story has so many twists...I love it!
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Old 09-12-2007, 06:51 AM   #1011
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Alright, I'm finished with my paragraph. I'm going to edit it in now.

"Let's do this!" Kenko's voice echoed slightly.
When the hollow turned to face his new opponent, he narrowly missed getting stabbed in the face. "Ughhh!" the hollow grunted loudly as he grabbed for Kenko's zanpakuto, which resulted in him getting stabbed in his left arm.
Kenko's zanpakuto was momentarily stuck in the hollow's arm, but he quickly tore it out.
"Argh!" The pain was visible through the hollow's eyes.
Kenko jumped back, then rolled behind the cover of Tsuchi's earth wall. "Are you girls alright?" he asked concernedly.
"Miyahara-Chan took a nasty blow to the head." Tsuchi answered. "The hollow knocked her into a wall."
"I'm fine now though." Yumi said. "I can still fight. We have to destroy the hollow before it possesses someone else and it should die for good."
"Alright." Kenko whispered. "Here's the plan..." The two girls leaned in close and listened. "Let's go!"
Kenko and Yumi ran out from behind the earth wall and, Kenko to the right side of the hollow and Yumi to the left. Tsuchi stayed safely hidden from the hollow's view, waiting for her chance to strike.
"I'm waiting for you." Kenko said lazily, with his zanpakuto propped up against his shoulder.
"Or you could try me again." Yumi said grimly, her zanpakuto held out in front of her in a fighting stance.
The hollow glanced back and forth between the two of them, appearantly trying to decide who to attack. Sensing that the hollow was confused, Tsuchi edged forward, ready to move.
With a graceful upward flick of her wrist, Yumi sent a blast of air from her zanpakuto at the hollow. It sliced across his right leg, leaving a deep cut. The hollow roared in pain.
Seizing her chance, Tsuchi ran out from behind the earth wall to launch a sneak attack. In a flash, the hollow appeared in front of her. He swiped his claws across her shoulder, sending her flying.
Yumi appeared behind her using Shunpo and barely managed to catch her, both of them slid backwards in the dirt. Tsuchi struggled to her feet, breathing hard and clutching her heavily bleeding shoulder. Yumi moved protectively in fron of her.
"Ha, you think I would fall for that again?" the hollow asked, sneering. "This time I made sure to keep track of all of you. I'm not going to let any of you out of my sight again. You will all die here!"
'Not good.' thought Kenko. 'Even wounded, this hollow is incredibly strong. Looks like I'll have to use Bankai.'
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Old 09-12-2007, 07:16 AM   #1012
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Nice paragraph UQ! I'm going to edit mine in now. It'll finally finish the hollow fight, lol.

Kenko thought quickly, plans running through his head. 'That's the one!' "Nakamura-Chan, stay out of this, ok? But don't let your guard down for one moment!"
"You won't last 5 minutes against me!" the hollow laughed.
Kenko charged, his zanpakuto in fron of him, still thinking through the next part of the plan. He leaped into the air about 10 feet from the hollow and landed next to Tsuchi and Yumi. "Plan B." he whispered out of the corner of his mouth.
Yumi nodded, then leaped into the air and swung Nejime several times. The air waves sliced all over the hollow, leaving lots of shallow cuts. She landed on the other side of him. The hollow attacked and she parried, effectively blocking him.
"Bankai." Kenko calmly stated and his zanpakuto floated out of his hand and hung suspended in midair in front of him. He concentrated on Captain Hitsugaya and said "Reign over the frosted heavens Hyorinmaru! Mimic Mozou!"
Mozou glowed brightly and mimiced Hyorinmaru. Kenko advanced on the hollow. "Now you die!" he yelled and swung his zanpakuto at the same time the hollow lunged at him. The water dragon errupted out of the end of the zanpakuto and splashed the lower half of the hollow, freezing his legs to the ground. His momentum allowed his upper half to move forward and he managed to catch Kenko in his jaws. "Ahhh!" Kenko yelled in agony as the hollow bit down on his side.
Yumi stood frozen in horror, eyes wide and unable to move. Tsuchi was too weakened from her shoulder wound, she took a step forward and fell to her knees. 'Move!' Yumi screamed in her head. She willed her feet forward and ran towords Kenko.
All of a sudden, the hollow gave a tremedous roar of pain as his mask was split open from behind. Kenko fell to the ground as the hollow disentigrated.
Yumi came to a halt in front of the person who had destroyed the hollow. "Captain Zaraki!" she gasped, as he stood there with a disgusted expression on his face.
"Yay!" Yachiru cheered from Kenpachi's shoulder. You killed the hollow Ken-Chan!"
"We would have been here sooner if we hadn't listened to the lieutenant's directions." Ikkaku said, glaring at Yachiru.
"Shut up baldy!" Yachiru yelled angrily.
"We shouldn't have even come. This was a waste of time. It wasn't a challenge at all." Kenpachi grumbled.
Ayami ran forward to check on Tsuchi while Yumi went to help Kenko and Yachiru jumped up and down on Keisuke, giggling and trying to wake him up.
"Let's go Yachiru, Ikkaku." Kenpachi ordered.
"Thank you Captain Zaraki!" Yumi called after their retreating backs.
Just then, Tryphena and Captain Unohana showed up. Tryphena rushed over to her friends as Captain Unohana immeadiately began working on Kenko since he had sustained the most serious injuries.
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Old 09-12-2007, 07:20 AM   #1013
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I can 't think of anything to say about Tryphena 's current mission on seeking Unohana. I don 't know what Unohana would even say. So, it looks like I 'll be stuck for a while!

Nice job on the paragraph, UQ!
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Old 09-12-2007, 07:29 AM   #1014
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uh-oh...the Bankai is coming out...getting very interesting. Nice paragraph UQ, good battle.
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Old 09-12-2007, 08:12 AM   #1015
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sweet paragraphs and ur leaving me in suspense gs lol
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Old 09-12-2007, 08:18 AM   #1016
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There, I finished it now. Finally done with the hollow fight, lol. It took forever.
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Old 09-12-2007, 08:20 AM   #1017
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nice chapter GS, not done yet uh...well that's cool I'm glad I read it all before I posted it. Unohana and the 4th squad are gonna have their work cut out for them
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Old 09-12-2007, 08:21 AM   #1018
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nice job gs, good writing. i'm almost done with a paragraph myself ill post it in the morning when im done.
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Old 09-12-2007, 08:27 AM   #1019
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Cool SG, can't wait to read it. Good luck with writing it!
We all got pretty banged up, lol. Yumi probably has a concussion.
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