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28-05-2008, 12:44 AM
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| Akatsuki |
Before I begin, Halftime gave me permission to be in his clan & he 's helping me out w/ this. Forum Name: SweetyKnight Character name: Tenshiru Hiromu Eye color: Dark Brown Hair color: Jet Black Sex: Female Age: 10 Height: 4' 4" Weight: 77 lbs. Blood Type: O Country of Birth: The Land of Fire Physical Description: Tenshiru has pretty, curly waist-length jet black hair, long eyelashes, and wears a 2-piece Chinese-style out fit, that 's dark green, red, and navy blue. Personality: Tenshiru is very sweet and sensitive, and can be a bit flirtatious. She has a love for good-looking older Shinobi males ranging from the ages of 24-50. She 's also a bit of a cry-baby, but she does n 't give up on things easily. Likes: Good-looking older Shinobi men, cats, reading romance novels, learning Dislikes: Younger guys (around her age), traitors, liars. Nindo: None, as of yet. History: Tenshiru does n 't remember very much about her life since she had been orphaned at the age of 5. Her Father was the leader of the Hiromu Clan and her Mother was a relative of the Harper clan. Her Father 's clan was wiped out by a mysterious illness and it had just so happened to effect her Mother as well. Surprisingly, the illness did n 't effect Tenshiru. She was adopted by a handsome older Shinobi named Cain, a close friend of her Father 's and has lived with him ever since, and tends to be a bit clingy towards, never wanting to leave his side. Tenshiru is Rangoku 's neighbor and knows him as the successor of his clan when his Father dies. That 's all that she knows of him. Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: Same info as Rangoku 's. Village: Leaf Shinobi Rank: Academy Student
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01-06-2008, 01:44 AM
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| Medical-nin | Quote:
alrite GN, or any other mod, my char graduated into genin, so can i make her now
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06-06-2008, 06:31 AM
| #183 |
| Academy Student |
Sorry it took me so long to put this up, I've been grounded off and on from the computer and one of the RPs on another site really picked up. Here's Tadea, he goes with Artemis. Username:blackhope146 Name: Roken Tadea Eyes: Blue Hair: Black Sex: male age: 15 height: 5'9" Weight: 130 Blood Type: O COB: Suna Description: black pants, black shirt, red zip up sweater, shinobi shoes. shaggy, longish hair. small nose, large eyes, very much the kawaii younger brother type. (I'm thinking about trying to do a picture, i'm not good at describing in words, it's something I'm working on as an author.) Personality: sweet and mildly innocent, cares about his family Likes: cousin, 'father', and fire Dislikes: people who are mean to his family History: His biological family is unknown, but he was found at the age of two in Suna with a 18 year old girl. She herself was nearly dead and while they did have a few features in common (facial: eyes, nose and mouth) leading those who found them to beleive that she was his sister or cousin (possibly mother) she died before she could tell them (she's been sick for some time and didn't receive proper medical attention). Artemis and her uncle were visiting and Artemis banged up her arm practicing some taijutsu (she hit her target and sprained her wrist). While at the hospital she met a little boy who didn't seem to be able to speak. When her uncle heard his story, he desided to take the boy into his home and raise him in the ninja way. His training was strict and began as soon as the boy could run steady. He was enrolled into the ninja acadamy, like others his age and his 'father' desided to wait until he was sure his son was ready to take the genin exam. Artemis did not want to leave her cousin/brother behind and waited for him to be ready. Village: Konaha Bloodline: None Justus: Usual Rank: Acadamy student.
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06-06-2008, 07:26 AM
| #184 |
| Kajou Kazuki |
Might want to be a bit more descriptive in both biography and description. Also, if he's an academy student you might want to make him younger.
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06-06-2008, 10:24 PM
| #185 |
| Academy Student |
K, i'll work on that. As for his age, you have to look at Artemis's age as well. He had to have her uncle's permission to take the exam to become a genin, and Artemis refused to take hers until he could. Her uncle's a little.... strict on some things.
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06-06-2008, 10:51 PM
| #186 |
| Death comes to you |
well I would say lower the age but i guess u have a reason for that well for now I would suggest expanding on the history(why his father left him was there any other reletives who could of helped but didn't) , personality(like how does he react in a group or alone) though I'm not sure but the uncle thing but I'll leave that for someone else to deal with
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06-06-2008, 11:21 PM
| #187 |
| ANBU |
updaets i know if you look you cant see them but there ther
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07-06-2008, 09:51 PM
| #188 |
| Kajou Kazuki |
You've been gone for to long. You'll have to start as an Academy student again. Sorry.
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08-06-2008, 06:16 AM
| #189 |
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((ok GN, figured it was worth a shot here is my new character))Forum Name:HIDDENMISTDEMON Character name: Tatsuo Mizake Eye color: Green Hair color: Silver-ish (white...) Sex: male Age: 7 yrs. old Height: 4"6' Weight: 100lbs Blood Type: AB- Country of Birth: Hidden Cloud Village Physical Description: Tatsuo's hair is spiky and about 2 inches tall. He is generally wearing a black, full body rash guard (think under armor if that term is more comfortable to you). On top of this, he wears a red T-shirt with medium length sleeves (the sleeves come to about the middle of his forearms) and longer black shorts. He has a scar on his left arm, from a stab wound suffered in his earlier childhood. Personality: Tatsuo is easily distracted, and falls asleep easily because of his bloodline limit. This causes people to automatically assume he is a lazy slacker, though he is far from it. Tatsuo is a very active kid, (despite the fact that he always seems tired) and likes to meet new people. Likes: Meeting new people, sleeping in comfortable places, oranges Dislikes: Bullies, people that call him lazy, people that always want to fight for no reason. Nindo: "To become a ninja by any means necessary, so that my mother can be rescued." History: Tatsuo was born in the cloud village, from a family of refugees. They had fled The Village hidden in the mist, because of mounting debt, and they were tired of being harassed by the local mob. This family, was never known to the other clan in konoha, and they were likewise ignorant of them as well. This being the case, both families believed themselves to be the last of the clan. Tatsuo was born on a calm summer evening, just as the sun was setting. His parents were always doing very strange things, (in his opinion) such as not letting him make friends, and always moving... all the time. He never really had a home since his family was always on the run. When Tatsuo turned five, the mob finally caught up with his family. Tatsuo was taken hostage, and when his parents (trained shinobi, about chuunin level) fought back, he was stabbed in his arm, to show that the people were serious about killing him. Tatsuo's parents immediately gave up, as the blade was moved to their sons neck. He was forced to watch as his father was beheaded, and his mother was captured and enslaved. The mobsters left Tatsuo sitting in a mixture of his own blood and his fathers. Tatsuo ran off into the forest, crying and emotionally destroyed at what he had just seen. He fell asleep near a pond, were some local konoha ninja's passed by. Perplexed by the situation before them, the passing ninja took Tatsuo to the Raikage, and it was determined that Tatsuo would be taken back to konoha to be put into the academy. When questioned about why he was in the forest alone and covered in blood, he told the story of the night before, much to the horror of the ninja's before him. Tatsuo began to cry again. A few months later, he was accepted into the Konoha Ninja Academy. Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: ((alright, this clan apparently got deleted, but I am still going to use it if that is ok. GN didn't have a problem with it so...)) Mirage: Utilizing the adrenaline within their own bodies, and siphoning off the adrenaline of other ninjas (in range), the Mizake clan can boost their taijutsu skills to a very high level, with little effort, though there are side effects if done without proper training. The body can only handle as much as it has been trained to handle. The Mirage grows stronger as the user ages, to the point that the strongest Mizake ninja, were the oldest. ((bit of history on them)) The clan was destroyed, to the point of extinction, by the clans lust for battle. Now, there only remains a small handful of the Mizake clan, scattered about the world, nearly all of them are completely ignorant of each other. Village: Konoha Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student Jutsus: None as of yet, new academy student! Last edited by HIDDENMISTDEMON; 08-06-2008 at 10:20 PM. |
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08-06-2008, 10:12 AM
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| At the end of the world |
I can't say yes or no to your character. But I do know that your character is not old enough for Academy. You should look into Academy thread and decide what would suit your character. Some guidelines for academy students. Quote:
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08-06-2008, 11:06 PM
| #191 |
| Medical-nin Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Texas
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ok ok... I edited, any more issues with it? I really need to know so that I can fix them or explain something better so I can start rp'ing XD!
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08-06-2008, 11:07 PM
| #192 |
| Kajou Kazuki |
Okay. This is just downright freaky. I forgot to respond this morning so I just wanted to do it now and at the exact same moment I see you've posted xD Anyway, the age was something I wanted to comment on but it's good now. Do remember that since he's 7 you'll be in the academy for a LONG time. Martzie, this is actually a point I wanted to discuss with you but we'll do it over MSN. Anyway, approved ^^
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09-06-2008, 02:12 AM
| #193 |
| Academy Student |
History: His biological family is unknown, but he was found at the age of two in Suna with a 18 year old girl. She herself was nearly dead and while they did have a few features in common (facial: eyes, nose and mouth) leading those who found them to beleive that she was his sister or cousin (possibly mother) she died before she could tell them (she's been sick for some time and didn't receive proper medical attention). Artemis and her uncle were visiting and Artemis banged up her arm practicing some taijutsu (she hit her target and sprained her wrist). While at the hospital she met a little boy who didn't seem to be able to speak. When her uncle heard his story, he desided to take the boy into his home and raise him in the ninja way. His training was strict and began as soon as the boy could run steady. He was enrolled into the ninja acadamy, like others his age and his 'father' desided to wait until he was sure his son was ready to take the genin exam. Artemis did not want to leave her cousin/brother behind and waited for him to be ready.
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09-06-2008, 08:50 AM
| #194 |
| Death comes to you |
that's good now you just need to put it with the rest of your character profile
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10-06-2008, 08:55 PM
| #195 |
| Academy Student |
There, check it now, i added some things to the description. I'll try to do a picture of him and Artemis, but it might take a while. My uncle's wedding is this weekend and I'll be out of town for about a week, and I'm in the process of moving.
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14-06-2008, 03:26 AM
| #196 |
| Academy Student |
this my first time trying this let me know if it not detailed enough Forum Name: Shaun903 Character name: Surorov Romanov Eye color: Black Hair color: Silver Sex: Male Age: 10 Height: 5'4 Weight: 100 Blood Type: AB Country of Birth: Fire Country Chakra: Fire Affinity Physical Description: Suvorov is tall and slender, athletically Build for his age. Konoha and has it pulled back over his head. He Wears a red button up shirt with a white T-shirt underneath. Has Black Jean with a Pouch on each leg and Black Boots. he has a red and white belt that he wears with Konoha symbol on it. Personality: Suvorov is mostly quiet and shy, when around new people, studying how they act to get a feel of who they are. When around friends, he is laid back sometimes but serious. Suvorov is very ambitious about everything he does. He has a lust for power also. When it comes to his friends he will protect them with his life. Likes: -Training -Missions -Money -Girls -Fighting -Horror Movies -Reading -Strong Opponents -Power -Games Dislikes: -Idiots -Being a Idiot -Being bored -Being Wrong -Being Disrespected Nindo: none yet History: Suvorov and his brother were born in Fire Country. His parents were traveling merchants . Always moving around. Growing up they lived in many places and saw many things. their parents spoiled them ever change the got. Having plenty of money, they lived in luxury. As much their family gave them they weren’t able to make friends for them, so they had very few people to talk to. Most of their early life was spend dreaming about being a shinobi. He always wanted to be a Powerful Shinobi ever since he can remember. He became a Academy student as soon as he was able to join the Academy. He is eager to prove himself and make now friends along th Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: None Village: Konohagakure (The Hidden Leaf Village) Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student Jutsus: None
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15-06-2008, 07:14 PM
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| Academy Student Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Gilmer
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So no one will get confused Surorov Romanov - shaun903 is my brother so I tried to make the history similar. Forum Name: Dale903 Character name: Andreyevich Romanov Eye color: Black Hair color: Silver-Blackish Sex: Male Age: 10 Height: 5'5 Weight: 100 Blood Type: AB Country of Birth: Fire Country Chakra: Wind Affinity Physical Description: Andreyevich is tall and slander, he is somewhat athletic build for his age. Konoha is pulled over around his neck. He wears a black t-shirt with red short sleeves with and there is a Konoha symbol on the back of his t-shirt. Has black cargo shorts with one pouch on his right leg and black boots with shin guards of them. Personality: Andreyevich speaks what’s on his mind even if it does get him in trouble. He has a strong spirit and a desire to become powerful, he very determined to succeed at what ever he does. He will go out of his way to help anyone that he can help, especially friends. Likes: -Training -Missions -Money -Girls -Fighting -Horror Movies -Reading -Strong Opponents -Power -Games Dislikes: -Being Disrespected -Being Wrong Nindo: none yet History: Andreyevich was born in Fire Country. Their parents were traveling merchants, always moving from Country to Country. Growing up Andreyevich and Suvorov lived in many places, experience many different cultures. Their parents spoiled them every chance they got, having plenty of money and living in luxury. As much as their family gave them, the one thing they could never give them was friends. All they had was each other and so they relied on each other as much as possible. Andreyevich spent his earlier childhood reading and learning about Shinobi and their way of life. He dreams of becoming a power shinobi along with his brother. He became a Academy student as soon as he was able to join the Academy. Clan De |