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23-08-2008, 12:14 AM
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Forum Name: Hyura Character name: Hugi Kuroka Appearance: ![]() Eye color: Blood Red Hair color: White Sex: Male Age: 18 Height: 5'9 Weight: 145 Blood Type: O Country of Birth: Kumogakure (Hidden Cloud) Physical Description: Anbu uniform, with red scarf wrapping around his bottom half of his face. He tied his katana onto his back. He is very muscular and tall. Handsome as well to some who have seen his true face. He wears his mask on his belt at all times. He receieved a scar on his left eye when a tiger attacked him when he was 11. Personality: He loves to talk and be curious of different weaponry. He always is relaxed and likes to fight when he is drunk after drinking legend says to be 3 jugs of sake. Is when his true power can be used. He loves to play with animals wrestling with them. Very wise and gentle with people. Likes: *Animals *Clouds *Rain *Stars Dislikes: *Blood *Famine *War Nindo: "Peace is all I wish for my people and my family...." History: Hugi loves to train with his weaponry and uses it well. He was born and raised in Kumogakure. Trained by a monk to have a loving and caring heart in all situations and never kill innocent lives no matter what the circumstances. He found out the truth of his parents and sisters when he was 9. He graduated from the academy when he was 10. And entered the village's ANBU division to work. Having to do everything by himself, when he returned home. He killed an innocent cat once and his master whipping him 100 times. After that, he grew even more determined to have peace in the world. When he became a vice captain in the anbu. His master taught him the legendary chidori. He made Hugi swear to not use it unless, it was in an emergency and he could no longer withold his anger. When he reached 14, he planned to leave the village and travel to find his sisters and to reunite with them. Clan Description: Hugi's clan consists of pure ice jutsus. His clan maniuplates the moisture in the air all around them. And uses the moisture to their advantage, for example, they can create ice wings to form on their back to use the wings for transportation. Other examples are, creating ice blades in their hands and using them in battle. Also these jutsus strengthen depending on the user's emotions. People like Unja, Unji and Hugi have reached the Max point and even breaked through the point in the bloodline abilities. They can also form ice around areas and cause that area and everything in it to shatter into pieces. When the abilities are activated, even a slight touch from the user will turn you into ice and be frozen until they free you. Bloodline Abilities: *Icera Wingera: Creates Ice wings on the summoners back and the user can use the wings as transport, As they can use it as an attack as well firing ice shards with their wings. *Icera Berna: Summons two gigantic ice blades in the user hands and attack with them with monsterous force. *Icera Wallera: Forms ice where every they please and then they shatter it whenever they want with a touch of a hand of finger and the area will crumble, such as poles, house etc. (But not people) *Icera Dragona: Summons the great ice dragon Galaonth. And It will fight with the user in battle. Sending mighty blasts of ice from its mouth. Village: Konoha Character Shinobi Rank: Kumogakure ANBU Jutsus: Bunshin No Jutsu Kawarimi No Jutsu Henge No Jutsu Chidori: This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into the user's arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity. Raikyu (Lightning Ball) : By gathering chakra between his twin swords, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy. Rairyū no Tatsumaki (Lightning Dragon Tornado) : Gathering lightning using his twin swords, the user spins around very quickly, forming the electricity into a likeness of a dragon's head. Once the user gathers enough lightning, a tornado of lightning will cover the area in front of him, temporarily trapping his opponents in a painful vortex of electricity. Hi no Hagane (Wings of Steel) : This jutsu is the one electrically-based jutsu the user can do without his swords. Using it, the user can cause a rockslide by sending a wave of electric energy into a cliff. Ikazuchi no Kiba (Thunder Fang) : By drawing together his twin swords, the user can send an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing him to create lighting strikes in any desired location. Kanashibari No Jutsu (Body Freeze Technique) - Freezes/Immoblizies enemy (stares them down) Meisai Gakure No Jutsu (Camouflage Concealment Technique) - Invisibility Kokohi No Jutsu (False Place Technique) - Changes Appearance of object Shunshin No Jutsu (Body Flicker) - Teleportation Kyouhen Senseu Biju (Kyouhen Style martial arts) Advanced Assassination Methods Bikou Ninjutsu (Shadowing Stealth Technique) Shunshin No Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Kage Shuriken No Jutsu (Shadow Shuriken Technique) Kakuremino No Jutsu (Camouflage Cloak Technique) Advanced Stealth Techniques Advanced Information Retreival techniques Suterusu sensu Buji (Suterusu style martial arts): The Suterusu style martial arts mainly focuses on long range fighting with various weapons. They are often very accurate and precise and use their weapons in such a way that it’s hard to track where they attacked from. Weapons He uses: *Twin Swords (same as Unja and Unji's) *Katana *Kunai *Shuriken *Daggers *Bombs *Explosive tags
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23-08-2008, 04:07 PM
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| Academy Student Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Depth Of The Undertow
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Rep Power: 0 ![]() | Forum Name: vAiz Character name: Nizru Niro Eye color: Ocean Blue Hair color: Brown Sex: Male Age: 12 Height: 5’6” Weight: 112 Blood Type: B Country of Birth: Fire Country(Konoha) Physical Description: Nizru wears a sort of akatsuki cloak wearing a large tan trench coat with pushed up collars and the coat is seen in a kind of damaged style. As far as his face goes, he has brown hair(in Kakashi’s style) only kind of spiked. Below his trench coat is nothing more than a fishnet shirt covered by a black short sleeved shirt with a bracer to hold his muscles in around his torso and forearms. [i]Personality:[i] Even though his young age, he thinks a bit dark about his own ambitions. It always looks like as if he’s hiding something as he’s quite secretive, mostly finding his true malice after accomplishing something big. It grows a bit within himself to perform good and doesn’t like to be in a sort of 2d place as “2d place is first loser”. He does posses some good shreds behind his dark appearance when help is needed so badly, he’ll mostly help but not if he thinks that it would be a waste of time. Likes: Training. Learning. Contests. Pride. Challenges. Dislikes: Cowardness. Lacking. Stupidity. Ignorant People. History: Nizru had no particular birth to speak of in physicality, he is a homologous composite being that was generated from someone else. However, the person that adopted him was a person that puts emphasis on strength: the person lived for Nizru’s older steph-brothers and also trained Nizru aswell telling him to “rise out above others” and perform good else he won’t have to come home for breakfast. Filled with strength, Nizru still lives at his so-called “parents” house going each day in and out knowing to perform good. Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: None Village: Hidden Leaf Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student(I guess?) Last edited by vAiz; 23-08-2008 at 04:53 PM. |
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23-08-2008, 04:21 PM
| #223 |
| Sannin |
i just wanna add one thing, for your clan vIAZ, if it means unknown we are kinda assuming that you'd tell us what clan you have. I mean dont say you were made from an Uchiha or something (since your homologous) and give yourself like Uchiha ablilities.
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23-08-2008, 04:27 PM
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| Kajou Kazuki Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: There.
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Ow shit, good point SB. I thought he said None Epic GN fail, just epic GN fail...
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23-08-2008, 04:51 PM
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Bah, problem is I can't think of a clan ability atm ![]() I'll do it later on, in like 5 mins but can't think of it atm.. EDIT: K, updated it. Last edited by vAiz; 23-08-2008 at 04:54 PM. |
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28-08-2008, 02:52 PM
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| Hunter-nin | Forum Name: Gaja 90 Character Name: Noriyuki Sakumo Eye color: Green Hair color: Blond Sex: Male Age: 9 Height: 130cm Weight: 40kg Blood Type: B- Country of Birth: Hi no Kuni / Konohagakure Physical Description: Sakumo wears black ľ’s with several side pockets, black finger tipples gloves, a gray T-shirt with a black Konoha symbol on the left sleeve and the normal ninja footwear. He has blond spiky hair that goes in all directions, bright green eyes and is light tanned. He generally doesn’t stand out physically from the other children of his class, while he is a talented athlete. Personality: Sakumo is a very nice kid, polite in his manner of speech, however quite insecure in himself at times, which leads to the fact that he never complains about stuff. Whenever he does something wrong he will lie his way out of it with his favorite lie, namely that a raccoon did it. He generally dislikes reading academy books since Aiko normally explains everything to him at dinner. He also has no shame whatsoever, so he won’t back down from asking sometimes strange stuff and yelling at the teachers weird hair style, or asking Kisu about her underwear just to see if her favorite color and her panties match. He doesn’t realize yet that he is a pervert in the soul, a thing that amuses Kaede to no end. He however doesn’t realize that he is a pervert yet, and will always get confused when people bring the subject up. He also has a huge appetite for a child of his age and doesn’t mind eating other peoples meals even if right in front of their noses. Likes: Aiko, Candy, Raccoons, The Color Yellow Dislikes: Spiders, Sake, Reading boring stuff Nindo: - History: Sakumo’s parents were close friends with the Kudan’s, however as his parents went MIA during a mission in the Waterfall Country, and without grandparents of his own the little Sakumo was put in a home from the age of 3. For several years now Aiko Kudan started visiting and taking care of him, he didn’t mind it though and developed a close bond with Aiko, who recently adopted him and made him start the shinobi academy two years ago. Now as part of class 3 his life and development continues. Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: Will be added later Village: Konohagakure Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student Jutsus: -
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28-08-2008, 03:00 PM
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| Kajou Kazuki Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: There.
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Accepted, will be rejudged when Bloodline comes though.
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28-08-2008, 06:57 PM
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| Academy Student | Forum Name: Kaisen Character name: Hayashi Kaisen Eye color: Brown Hair color: Black Sex: Male Age: 10 Height: ~140cm Weight: ~40kg Blood Type: O+ Country of Birth: Konoha, Fire Country Physical Description: Kaisen has a messy black hair of average length that completely conceals his ears and back of his neck with some of it slighty covering his eyes. He wears a light brown jacket with a simple white T-shirt under it and loose dark brown pants. His forehead protector is tied around his right shoulder. Personality: Kaisen is mostly a silent person, speaking and doing something only when he thinks it’s necessary. He usually observes people he doesn’t know before approaching them directly, and may treat them with cold attitude at first. Because of this he is often misunderstood by those who meet him for the first time. They may think that he is arrogant and generally doesn’t care about anyone, but it just takes time for him to open up to new people. (silent, observant) Don’t expect him to immediately jump into everything with enthusiasm. The environment he has gotten into doesn't suit him. While he may care very little about problems of those he doesn’t know well, he would put his life on stake when protecting true friends (if he manages to make any). (mostly indifferent) He doesn’t like showing off, and hates when others do that. Kaisen believes that shinobi can only be judged by what they have accomplished (missions, students taught), not how good their skills are. Most of all he hates those who put up fights with their fellow shinobi simply to demonstrate their own strength. In a generic situation where the outcome doesn't decide much (for him), Kaisen is an opportunist. He will always avoid an unneeded conflict. He will try to adapt to the situation to gain maximum good for himself and will not be willing to sacrifice anything for things such as ideals (again, true friends might be an exception). Kaisen is slow at making decisions and taking action, but when he has made up his mind, he never stops halfway. He prefers to choose his own path, rather than follow in others’ footsteps. He doesn’t let other people’s opinion to influence him, and always maintains his own point of view, but never tries to prove anything to others. (cool-headed, determined) Kaisen is self-sufficient in everything he does, or at least tries to be. He likes to train alone, and may reject help from others. He mostly enjoys monotonous tasks, such as practicing the same move or walking/running down a road, because he has time to think over everything that has happened to him during the day. Likes: Silence Monotonous tasks Having a clear goal before him Dislikes: Fuss Showoffs Talking about himself Responsibility Nindo: None yet. History: Hayashi Kaisen was born in the Hayashi clan. His clan was never considered as one of the strongest or most skilled. All its members were asked to put their effort into helping Hayashi name become recognized in Konoha, but Kaisen wasn’t bothered by that. In fact, the boy was never interested in taking a path of shinobi and was leading a careless lifestyle, until one day the head members of the clan grew tired of the slacker and sent him out to Konoha Ninja Academy with no right to return until he has become a respectable ninja. Clan Description/Bloodline Abilities: Hayashi is a small shinobi clan of Konoha that inhabits a forest area outside the bounds of the village. It is known for growing rare plants and herbs that can be used for making poison or medicine. Its members possess a variety of secret mixture recipes that can boost one’s physical characteristics with no to little harm to their health, which helps them greatly in combat. That is why most shinobi from Hayashi clan practice taijutsu, alongside with their main specialty – Water element ninjutsu. Some are said to also practice the use of poisoned weapons. Starting from their birth and up until the age of 10 years all clan members receive special treatment that involves use of a variety of natural medicaments that improve their body in many ways. Apart from acquiring an increased resistance to virus infections and poisons, members of the clan also gain an increased rate of chakra regeneration, which could be noted as one of the clan’s main traits. This is a result of stimulating internal organs which reproduce chakra. It does not mean that Hayashi gain a limitless supply of extra stamina in battle, nor does it increase its overall capacity or help a clan member execute jutsus that he or she normally wouldn’t be able to use because of chakra requirements. Hayashi simply recover faster in battle, even if they have used a lot of chakra consuming moves, and are better at molding chakra. Village: Konoha Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student Jutsus: None Last edited by Kaisen; 11-10-2008 at 12:00 AM. |
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29-08-2008, 09:48 PM
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| Special Jounin Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Fleeting White~I'm a prude Jigallow
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Since your clan has already been accepted, I'll approve it. Very nice profile, I look forward to seeing you in action. If you have questions concerning the academy, contact Martzu or crakerjakk since I believe they are in charge of the academy as of now. Edit: Newest Character Forum Name: Sasuke's Legacy Character Name: Masai, Kito Eye Color: White Hair color: White Sex: Male Age: 23 Height: 6 foot 4 inches Weight: 205 pounds Blood type: 0- Country of Birth: Fire Country Physical Description: The mysterious Kito towers above most people at a dazzling six foot four inches, but his body is naturally skinny. Although he’s thin, Kito is powerful and is laden with muscles, giving him a nicely toned body. His facial features are remarkably similar to Hinaho’s, although few rarely ever see his true identity due to the fact his appearance can always change. His snow-white hair is in long silky strands that cover the right side of his face, shielding his eye. But Kito often has the habit of pushing his hair back before it falls right back into place. Kito’s eyes are white, just like all of his clan mates and match his light skin tone. The man known as the “White Magician” wears white baggy pants and traditional Japanese sandals. Over a blue undershirt is a floppy white kimono shirt with long sleeves. But usually, when he’s in his regular form, they just see his long grey cloak with white clouds etched all over it. Kito also wears a straw hat when in his regular form. And on his right arm, over the bicep, are the tied headbands of the five great nations. Personality: No one really knows the entire person known as Kito, since there are so many shades to the man that even if you are lucky or good enough to see his regular self, it would take years to truly understand him. When he’s not disguised and acting as a different person completely, he’s usually pretty quiet and calm with a hint of frivolousness in him. Kito is an amazingly intellectual person, who could have easily whizzed through the academy of all the countries at a genius rate, but since he was playing the role of a character he often held himself back. Under Kito’s calm surface is a goal that he has set his heart on, and will not stop until it’s completed. In a sense it’s revenge, but he’s not angry underneath his calm face, he just wants to destroy what destroyed his clan and the people involved. Likes: • Rain • Mountains Dislikes: • The Clans that destroyed his people • The Five Great Nations Nindo: “The red moon will show her face when our enemies’ blood has been spilled, so peace to you brothers, rest in our mountain path.” History: Right before the destruction of the clan that wielded clouds, Kito was born to the royal family that led their people. Although Kito was not destined to be the heir, he was the younger brother of the most promising Kumo user alive. Around the age of three, Kito witnessed the destruction of everything he knew, his mountain home being obliterated by enemies that had banded together under the name of fear. Luckily, Kito’s parents and his younger sister survived and fled into exile. Although their legacy had been destroyed, they were still proud of who they were and taught all of their traditions and lore to Kito and his sister. Soon, assassins who had heard that Kumo users had escaped the mountain started looking for them, and this resulted in Kito’s parents dying. From then on, as teenagers, Kito and his sister perfected their cloud arts and began their quest for revenge. Although Kito’s sister was full of anger, Kito had grown into a calm avenger, and traveled with his sister to the Lightning Country where the spent their early teenage years. Kito would recognize the Hidden Cloud Village as his home more than any other place, and after becoming genin under fake aliases with his sister; they started their research into the clan’s past. And over the next few years that followed, the two prodigy cloud users roamed from nation to nation researching hidden roots to their clan and all the while perfecting their skills while getting headbands. Soon they had a headband for all of the five great nations. After more investigating Kito and his sister discovered that their clan’s ancestors had come from the lightning country, but had been driven out by competitors. So Kito and his sister located one of the clans that had waged war on their ancestors and staged an assassination on their leader’s only son. The Novahen Clan was an above average clan of renowned raiton users, and they were the last known descendents of the tribes and clans that drove Kito’s ancestors to the mountains in Konoha. All of the others had squabbled amongst themselves for the power that the Kumo users left behind. Although the Novahen had amazing chakra mass for raiton users, their development with jutsus was limited. Although instinctive and strong, intelligence usually wasn’t their strong point, so they relied on a hierarchy to make sure things ran smoothly. And even though they were a fairly respected clan, they got most of their wealth by trafficking drugs. The sister of the siblings designed the plan that took two days of preparation, and on a cloudy dark night they made their move. First, Kito and his sister systematically lured two lowly ranked clan members who were around their size into a shack, disguised as poor children trying to help their dying mother. Once inside, pure white cloud chakra was smothered down the throats of both women, muffling them and suffocating them instantly. Without a second’s hesitation, they morphed their cloud chakra around themselves to fit the description of both victims and walked back into the palace. Their presence went unnoticed until they reached the entrance to the main chambers of Heroshi Novahen, the current leader of the clan and the same bedroom his son stayed in. The duo of vengeance were halted and asked their business with his Excellency. Of course the pair had thought of this, but Kito’s sister was too close to tasting enemy bloody and went into a wrathful state and killed the guards mercilessly before busting through the entrance. Kito had followed suit, but what lurked behind the golden doors was a life-changing surprise. All 34 raiton warriors waited inside, ready to strike and immediately lashed out. Taken by surprise, the Masai’s sister was pierced dozens of times by lighting strikes to every inch of her body. Kito fortunately was back far enough that he reacted in time, creating a protective dome of Kumo chakra before blowing a hole in the wall of the estate, escaping into the gloomy streets. Kito was forced to flea the village, using his cloud abilities to disguise himself once again. From then on, he felt it as his responsibility to avenge his sister the most. At the ripe age of 18, Kito went into exile to train, learning the arts his forefathers had developed and mastering them. By the age of 20, Kito was nearly a complete master of his bloodline, and used his skills for deception. He spent the next few years tracking enemies of his old clan, perfecting his disguises and murdering certain people, clans, and sometimes-even villages. It made no difference to him. By this time, his power had risen to such a level that it took high-level jounin to notice that Kito wore disguises. Kito was so talented at masking himself, that he even perfected the art of faking elements. Using his manipulation abilities to make his chakra clouds exactly like other jutsus, he could even mask the fact that he used clouds as a weapon. Now Kito was able to fake suiton, katon, raiton, and doton jutsus with ease, fooling his opponents even more. Only strong jounin could recognize Kito’s disguises, and even then, Kito used his actual Kumo powers to kill them with even more ease. Although Kito has killed many times, he’s not cold-blooded and usually refrains from being too cruel unless he has to. Since getting a headband under different identities from all the great nations, Kito has moved back to Kumogakure and has been listed as almost the top priority for capture in their bingo book. He’s been nicknamed “The Illusionist” and the “White Magician”. Kito was one of the fastest villains to move up through the bingo books in Kumo, and although Kito recognizes he’s done wrong before, he doesn’t consider himself a criminal. Since then he’s made a small organization to help him operate, but for the most part he does things alone. Some say that even his name, Masai Kito, which mysteriously popped up out of nowhere and spread like wildfire is a fake name as well. No one knows his real name, if Masai Kito isn’t actually his title. Extra Info: The great shinobi known as “The Illusionist” handpicked a group of special nin to aid him at his cause. This expert organization is known internationally as Youmei, Japanese for Order. Each member has a certain quality that is fundamental to the destruction of entire clans or specializes in stealth and assassination. They range from genjutsu expertise to economic influence and political leverage. There isn’t much known about the number of the Youmei or who they are, but they are suspected to be the equivalent of special jounin. Bloodline ability: His cloud inheritance belongs to the Furui Ookami Kumo Ichimon clan. An ancient clan wiped out from war and the trait was not found until now. The carrier can distribute cloud chakra from any opening in the body. Village: Kumogakure, Konohagakure, Kirigakure, Iwagakure, Sunagakure Rank: S-Ranked Missing Nin Jutsus: Complete Mastery of Kumo jutsus Molecular control of cloud chakra
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04-09-2008, 07:19 AM
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((hey guys just reposting my char)) Forum Name:mikama san Character name: janto sama Eye color: sky blue Hair color:blonde Sex:male Age:14 Height: 4ft-5 Weight: 75 pnds Blood Type: O+ Country of Birth: Konoha Physical Description: short spikey hair, wares a white robe, allways wareing shades. Personality: janto sama is a brutal character, he never has time for the weak mined, allways looking for fights. Likes: makeing new friends, worthy opponents, food, girls. dislikes: woman beaters, cheaters, dishonerable people Nindo: i will become the best ninja ever born! History:Janto grew up in a normal household, but was bullied a lot when he was a child, over time Janto became very tough after getting used to the bullying, and started to stick up for himself, he enjoyed fighting and became a bully himself, and then enrolled in the Shinobi Academy Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: able to withstand countless attacks Village: Konoha Character Shinobi Rank: Academy Student Jutsus: Kawarimi no jutsu, Henge no jutsu. Housenka no Jutsu.
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04-09-2008, 11:21 AM
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| Kajou Kazuki Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: There.
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Approved, shouldn't you make his age a little younger though? 20 is real old for Academy Student standards.
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04-09-2008, 11:15 PM
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eh, well a bloodline really cant be to withstand alot of attacks also. I mean I dont think i've seen your bloodline in the bloodline section of the rp. If you already have made it, please give it a name. And you can say that you got hit with rasengan but can withstand countless attacks, just put that as his personality or something. Im not being mean, we just like specifics. Anyway if i'm wrong on any of this, feel free to tell me, i'm human too. On a side note, your character sounds alot like my character Takashi. If you intend to keep your character the way he is, give me a pm sometime lol
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05-09-2008, 03:16 AM
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A good catch SB. Although GN is the big man around here, he's loaded with stuff to do, so every once in a while he slips up. Not approved. I'm 99% sure there's been no clan accepted that has such a description. First of all, you'd have had to write out the application for the clan, and you probably would've given it a clan name. The fact you didn't include it says to me that you just added that in there. I checked the other profile you posted a while ago, and it had no such thing for the clan so I think you edited it in. Correct me if I'm wrong. It's not bad that you're willing to create a clan, by all means go for it, just keep it within reason. It would be incredibly hard to stop someone who can withstand countless attacks, which is simply unreasonable for fellow rp'ers. Take others into consideration, if you would. Not saying you aren't now, but it's hard to rp against somebody like that. Also, since your character is a student, you aren't allowed to have jutsus yet. The academy doesn't really have any records of you getting any jutsus down, and Housenka is out of the question unfortunately. Sorry for being so harsh, but we have to be strict about this stuff or newer members' demand will go higher and higher. You can either start as a student with limited skills until you establish yourself and KM (then you get more freedom once we know you won't GM, go inactive, etc.) or you can start as a genin with the three basic jutsus only. Being a genin is challenging because of the lack of a team and a sensei, unless you go through the academy and get stuck with some other rp'ers, where we assign a jounin to you. So after the long speech, disapproved pending clan/bloodline and jutsu editing. Housenka has never been used in the manga by a character who isn't an Uchiha btw, at least not that I know of. I don't know if we allow that to anyone outside of the Uchiha clan or not, regardless of who they are, but I'm not sure about it.
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05-09-2008, 07:59 AM
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Ow shi- Did not see that It was so short I assumed he had no bloodline. It's not allowed to have a bloodline like that. Also, describe it better.
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28-09-2008, 11:41 PM
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| Hope's Last Chance | Forum Name: Chazu Character name: Onyx Shibuya Eye color: Green Hair color: Black Sex: Male Age: 11 Height: 135cm Weight: 45kg Blood Type: O- Country of Birth: Konohamura Physical Description: Onyx has spikey black hair with bright green eyes. He is long and lanky, but has a lot of lean muscle. He wears a black shirt and an orange and black hoodie jacket, baggy orange shorts that cover his knees, black boots with orange accents. Has black fingerless gloves and a black scarf covers his mouth. Wears his konoha headband on his forehead. Personality: Kinda philosophical. Quiet, cross between L (Death Note) and Cloud (FFVII) Likes: -girls (secretly) -sesame chicken -fighting -large weapons Dislikes: -homework -fear -not being the best Nindo: I'm Konoha's green-eyed hope. History: Onyx was a miracle born to a loving mother and father who thought they could not have children. When they realized the mother was pregnant, they took all precautions to protect her and make sure the child was born safely. Nine months later, the child, named Onyx, was born with no complications, but looked absolutely nothing like any of the family, which made it seem like Onyx was a gift of the gods. Onyx was treated like a prince, however much discipline was instilled in him, as was a fighting spirit, and an undying love for his village. Now, one of the youngest ninjas to come out of the academy, he now joins his two other members and his Jounin leader, and dreams of becoming the Hokage. Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: TBA Village: Hidden Leaf Character Shinobi Rank: Genin Jutsus: -Henge no jutsu -Bunshin no jutsu -Kawarimi no Jutsu ((*NOTE*: By secretely likes girls, means he likes them but acts like he doesn't, NOT that he acts gay but likes girls. Onyx is in now way homosexual. Just thought I'd put this here...))
__________________ You're the only one i turn to When I feel like no one's there And when I'm lonely in my darkest hour You give me the power To sit and pretend Last edited by Chazu; 09-11-2008 at 10:44 PM. |
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03-10-2008, 07:38 PM
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| Kajou Kazuki Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: There.
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