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Forum Name: Ransofaraway

Character name: Akagi, Haido

Eye color: Brown eyes

Hair color: Dirty blond hair

Sex: Male

Age: 12

Height: 5'2

Weight: 100

Blood Type: AB

Country of Birth: Hidden Leaf

Physical Description: His body is completely lean, nothing but muscle. This doesn't mean he is extremely strong for his age, but more that he has been training his whole life. He has barely any fat on his body, about the minimum you need to keep living. He wears a white shirt, with a mesh shirt under it. He also wears white pants, he has learned to do laundry at a very young age. Haido wouldn't be easily seen in a crowd but only for one reason. His right arm is made completely out of metal, like Ed's from full metal alchemist, but more simple. (will be explained later). Now, Haido had two scrolls attached to his back, but together there are three different ones. They have band of white, red, and black.

The scroll with the white band is his normal arm, the scroll with the black band is for an arm that had been reinforced for strength and defense. It is slightly bulky but because of Haido's weight and strength it slows him down greatly. This arm is usually used for hand to hand combat and where Haido can afford to loose speed. The last scroll has a red band on it. The arm is built like his normal but basically had no defense to it at all, it could take a few direct hits before breaking but nothing more than that. But this arm is built for distance fighting. There is a small hole in the palm and out of it comes a 10 foot long metal whip, like the puppet guy in the naruto show. But it has no poison and there is one other difference, coming from the tip of the whip towards the hand it is smooth to the touch. But if you go the other direction it would start to tear at the skin.

Personality: Haido has a very firey personality when it comes to two things. His friends and his strength. He would easily give his life for his friend and their protection. He also wants to become a great ninja and prove that the need of ninjutsu isn't always needed.

Likes: He loves to listen and just sit out in nature and think. He likes to be calm but he can also be really hyper.

Dislikes: Liar and people that threaten his friends, family, and his village.

Nindo: To use his strength to protect and defend never to harm people for other reasons. He is very determined in what he does. When he is given something to do he does it with his whole heart and soul. He is slightly upbeat about everything he does, even in failure he sees the bright side of it and learns from his mistakes.

History: Haido was born into a middle class family and didn't really ever seem to special. One day playing with some friends in the forest, Haido was attacked by animal. It ripped his right arm to pieces and made it completely useless. Because of the Sand village becoming closer to the Leaf village, there was a small chance for something to be done. Just like Chiyo, they gave him a puppet arm but Haido didn't want it to look like normal. He wanted to look at it to remind him of the attack and his weakness to fight it off. After many months of practice, just like when a person receives an artificial leg or arm, Haido was trained to use chakra strings to control it but because of his young age he still has trouble using it. He spent many hours at night moving his fingers, trying to make it look and act like normal. Because of this arm, it will causes making hands signs for jutsus very difficult for him. So because of this fact, he has put a lot of training into Taijutsu. Haido spent a lot of time still training with his arm and with his class. He soon built up the ability to use his arm perfectly like it was his own. But still using ninjutsu was difficult for him. He was finally able to graduate, after spending days and days on each jutsu that he needed to graduate. He was given the Genin rank and spent most of his time thinking of new ways to increase his Taijutsu skill with his right arm.

Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: His clan is just a normal family and nothing special to it.

Village: Hidden leaf

Character Shinobi Rank: Genin

Jutsus: Basic academy Jutsu

[Shadow Blade]

Forum Name:Shadow Blade

Character name: Fushichou, Takashi

Eye color: Blue

Hair color: White

Sex:M

Age: 17

Height:5'11"

Weight: Normal

Blood Type: O+

Country of Birth: Hidden Mist

Physical Description: Takashi has long white hair.And he wears a black robe which has a white cloth around his waist, where he keeps one sword that is completly black also.(in his picture he is wearing a white robe).

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Personality: Usually Takashi is a joker, he likes to make fun and have a good time wherever he is. But mainly he has changed his personality to be more of a serious person. He has cut down on how he acts as a joker but even if he is acting like that, he will still get serious when the time calls for it.

Likes:

The three F's

-food
-fighting
-females

Dislikes:
-killing

Nindo: "the most important lessons you learn are the ones you learn by yourself"

History: Takashi had recently taken a trip to the mist village he had trained there and wanted to become more powerful with his suition and fuuton jutsu. It has been two years and he has finally come back to Konoha to see if the village has changed (brief history of skip)

Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: Fushichou

Village: Konoha

Character Shinobi Rank: Jounin (Anbu: Kuma)

Jutsus:

Rasengan - Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Rasengan was a ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. Like Kage Bunshin, Naruto would adopt the technique as a signature move and make it all his own. The technique is unlike other jutsu in that it does not require any handseals, it just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact.

Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by Rock ninja. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja can grant themself near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system.

Kaze • Suiton KazeSuriyudaan no Jutsu- Wind/Water Dragon Blast Skill)
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
(Kaze • Suiton) KazeSuriyudaan is a ninjutsu utilized by the ninja Takashi, Takashi will use both Suition Suriyudaan no Jutsu and Kaze Kazudaan no Jutsu to fight using a Fuuton and Suiton dragon. Sometimes he will combine them, as they will twist around one another to attack.

Kaze Kazudaan no Jutsu (wind element, wind dragon blast)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Kaze Kazudaan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the wind Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of wind in the form of a dragon to rise from the air and then strike their target

Kaze Shi-rudo(wind shield)
Rank: -
Note: Special Bloodline Technique
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defence
Kaze Shi-rudo is utilized by the Fushichou Clan members, the clans ability will allow them to make a shield of wind, the sphere of wind will slightly elevate them up and surround them in a spherical shape of wind. Making it a defense for any angled attack.


Fuuton • Seppaku no Jutsu
Character Use: Takashi Fushichou
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Fuuton • Seppaku is a jutsu utilized by Takashi, Takashi will first place a tag on his opponent and then he will proceed to making hand seals, and finally opening his palm where a kanji sign will appear. After that has been done, Takashi can drastically increase the pressure on his opponents body, making it extremely hard for them to move. In addition, he can deplete the air molecules around his opponent, making it harder for them to breath. Although the opponent now has a barrier due to the pressure that is being exerted on them, only a powerful attack will be able to hit them and not get pushed down by the intense air pressure.

Suiton • Aisu Tsukurite- Water Maker
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Aisu Tsukurite no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by Takashi, which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a blue mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a huge amount of rain to fall.

Kirigakure no Jutsu - Hidden Mist
Technique Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.

Kaze no Yaiba - Sword of Wind
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Kaze no Yaiba is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Sand ninja Baki. After forming the needed hand seal, a cutting whirlwind will envelop his opponent and cut them to pieces. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty.

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.


Suiryuudan no Jutsu - Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Henge • Kongounyoi - Transform • Diamond-Like Hardness
Rank: -
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kongounyoi is a Ninjutsu technique used by Enma. Enma can transform his body into a diamond-hard staff. In this form he can extend the length of the staff and also alter the staff so his real body can be extended. One of the only things which can harm him in this form is Orochimaru's sword Kusanagi.

Kongou Rouheki - Indestructible Prison Wall
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense, Supplementary
Using his ability to Henge into his Kongou-nyoi form, Enma can create multiple copies of the his staff form to create a protective prison. Because of his virtually indestructible form, the prison can withstand a lot of damage.

Kongou Kabe- Indestructible Wall
Rank: -
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense, Supplementary
Using his ability to Henge into his Kongou-nyoi form, Enma jr. can create a big wall that has hardness equivalent to that of diamond like hardness to guard against attacks

Suishouha - Water Collision Destruction
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.


Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Kaze Bunshin- Wind clone
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Kaze Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes wind to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Kaze Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Kaze Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural wind state.

Sugoi Kaze no Yaiba - Great Swords of Wind
Rank: A
Range: Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
Sugoi Kaze no Yaiba is a variation of Kaze no Yaiba, expect its much more ranged the wind will affect a much larger area and there will be more wind blades.

Sugio Kire Tatsumaki -Great Slicing Tornado
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m),far (10m+)
Type: Attack/Defence
After making the proper hand seals the user maybe able to create a tornado with wind blades, it can be use as defence or to send it hurling towards the opponent .

Kaze Bakuha-Wind Blast
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
After making the appropriate hand seals, the user will put two fingers by his mouth and shoot out a big blast of wind Speeds of these winds can reach high hurrican levels to push back an oppoent.

Kaze Shuriken Bushin - Mass Wind Shuriken
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Much like kage shuriken bushin, the user will send out the kaze shuriken and then the user will make a string of hand seals to multiply the shuriken to a large amount.

Fuuton • Kienzan
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
This is a Takashi original, where Takashi makes an extremly sharp disc out of wind, this is a giant disc and cuts the air to travel at extrmely fast speeds, they appear as a blur while moving through the air. It is needed one hand to use and the user is rendered immobil after it

Kienzan Baizou
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
this attack is just like Kienzan but there are two kienzans instead of one.

Wind Curse Seal Lv. 1
Wearer: Takashi
History: Takashi got his seal from when he was apart of Nekura’s organization, as he was the one who was apart of the team working to get Nekura his money for his cruel experiments. Takashi wanted to seek power and he found in in a seal
Effects: Takashi’s body will become engulfed with tattoo marks that are straight lines all though out his body. In the level one stage of the infection he will be able to better control wind and his chakra along with all his general skills (strength, speed, etc) will increase too.


Wind Curse Seal Lv. 2
Wearer: Takashi
History: The seal on Takashi’s neck evolved into a level two within a two years as it made its way to infection level two.
Effects: Takashi’s body will become totally transformed, as his body will become a dark grey color and his eyes becoming yellow. His arms will grow much bigger and he will grow wings and a tail. In this form he resembles a gargoyle, and also the power with this is his wind control, chakra and general skills are greatly increased

New:

Taifuugan-Eye of the Typhoon
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
jutsu where six typhoons surround opponent and then whirlpool forms under them as they get sucked into the bottom the typhoons merge and become like a super powerful drill. If the oppoent attempts to jump out of the way of the whirlpool, well then the target will get extremely hurt as the typhoons merge, he will be stuck inbetween six spining typhoons.

Kyokugoma- Top Trick
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
.The user spins at extremely high speeds. The user forms a “mini-top” using fuuton control, which the user then uses to suck in the opponent. The wind power and the speed at which the user is spinning increases at a certain interval of time, every time. The advantage in this is if the opponent keeps refusing to get sucked it, the jutsu may eventually suck him in. The draw back is the user may die because there will be a point where the users entire atoms just get ripped apart. Also if the user cannot keep up the speed and gets tired, he will either get caught in his own jutsu or be forced to end the jutsu which will still leave him tired and vulnerable.

Kyokan Kihoutou-Giant Bubble Tower
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: S
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
In this jutsu the user blows up a or creates a very large or large soap bubble (using suiton, and its like blowing up a balloon is how it looks like). The user will then coat the bubble with a lot of chakra so it is not easily penetrated by anything. The target may take this jutsu as a joke, but the objective is to blow the bubble close to the opponent so the bubble will surround them in a sphere, or to blow it in a large area so the bubble sits in a dome shape around an area. Once inside the bubble the user will form an extremely fast spining vortex inside of the bubble, since the bubble isn’t easily broken it will be able to take the pressure, speed etc. of the vortex. Soon though, the speed and pressure will increase inside of the bubble until it will not be able to hold it any longer, this is where the user will detonate the balloon from the inside creating a big water explosion.

Mizugihei - Water Soldier
Character Use: Takashi
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack
The user will make the proper hand seals and then spit out a goopy liquid from the bowels of their stomach. This liquid or goop will form to an exact replication of the user like a mizu buushin. But the goop will be controlled by the user, the user will be in a state of meditation where he will control the soldier. The Soldier cannot use ninjutsu but if he is harmed maybe healed by the use of chakra by the user.

Chakra • Hizumi no Jutsu - Chakra Distortion
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack/Defence
Chakra Hizumi is a jutsu developed by Takashi. In this jutsu he creates a red ball in his hand, the ball seems red but a bit transparent and inside is some sort of spining red energy (think red rasengan almost but like the outer sphere is transparent and its light red). When this jutsu is launched at an opponent or directly inserted into an opponent via Takashi, the target will not be able to control his or her chakra, it will distort the circulatory system, the the chakra amount they can release, etc. Thus making the target unable to control what jutsu they are using or how they can sustain it or even get the right shape.

Chakra • Kyuushuuki no Jutsu -Chakra Absorber
Rank: Unknown
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Attack/Defence
This jutsu works like Takashi's Hizumi no jutsu, except it is colored green and whenever inserted into the opponent it sucks 10% of thier chakra every certain interval of time, the more chakra the faster it goes.

[Memori]

Forum Name: Memori

Character name: Memori Sonbou (Memory Loss)

Eye color: Light purple

Hair color: Dark purple with grey highlights in her bangs

Sex: Female

Age: 12

Height: 5'0

Weight: 105

Blood Type: -0

Country of Birth: land of fire

Physical Description: Memori is a medium height slim teenage girl. Her long dark purple hair usually down and hanging off her back. Her grey-streaked bangs would be always clovering a part of her light purple eyes. Usually a small smile on her red lips, more of a grin. Her usual outfit is some kind of a black, purple, or grey theme no matter what it was. She usually had a gothic look to her.

Personality: Joyful around her friends but even more-so around her enemies Memori usually faked a smile no matter what perdiciment she was in. She always liked making a quiet appearence, but when shes in a party or with a bunch of her friends she sure knew how to draw attention to herself. Memori's mood can change immediatly and sometimes does. One minute she can be slashing the skin off her oponents bones; the next hugging him/her and telling her opponent she was sorry. Never think you know Memori by her first impression for it always changes.

Likes:

- Cats and most animals
- poptarts
- liting a carrot on firing and pretending to smoke it
- her friends
- Her enemies
- the beach
- partying
- Games
- Squee'ing
- Archary
- whips
- Etc, Etc

Dislikes:
- Any kind of small or regular sized Doll.
- Dogs
- too much drama
- the color pink
- when people get to close to her
- unnessisary killing.

Nindo: ....

History: Her parents loved her and spoiled her rotton but never let her outside; not wanting her to experiance the dangers being in the real world with real ninja just like they never did themeselves. Her parents were one of the few people in the Kurama Clan that choose and did not know how to use Genjutsu and wanted Enkaku to not know that she was one born with such enormous skill in genjutsu that their illusions can actually produce tangible effects that occur in reality (which they found out by all her paintings of cats that sourrounded her house, which just so happened the next day. an infestation of cats sourrounding one area was never seen before, being the village didn't even have that many cats roaming about) Her name was Enkaku (meaning isolated). One day Enkaku happened to be looking out the window as she usually did. She spotted a boy the same age as her, 10, and smiled. The boy was playing with a ball and kicked it hard, hitting and crashing in the window next to the one she was looking out. Enkaku quickly recieved the ball and ran downstairs and opened the door taking her first footsteps outside. The boy smiled and took the ball form Enkaku. Seeing Enkaku's pale face he assumed she was sick and felt bad so he offered her to play with him. Two hours past and Enkaku's parents returned home, not finding Enkaku is her room. They rushed out near the forest and found Enkaku having the time of her life and playing with the boy. Now furrious they took Enkaku away and shifted her into homeless shelter were she didn't fit in; being made fun of for having no education and for being spoiled. On Enkaku's 11th birthday she found a cute homeless puppy on the streets and took it back to the shelter with her, saying it was her gift. The kids got jealous and kidnapped the puppy, holding her down, swinging the yipping defenceless animal by the tail and throwing it out the 2 story window to its death. Enkaku, now loosing it quickly took the collar around her neck and try to choke a kid to death, but failed miserably being she wasn't that strong. Enkaku ran away surviving the cold winter working hard and sleeping wherever she could in the village planning on living her life like this intill she could pay for a home she could call her own again, trying to forget all about her past and renaming herself Memori Sonbou, meaning 'Memory Loss' in English. One day she just happened to be walking about and met the same boy she was playing with when she was 10. She waved to him as he ran into a small academy; not realizing or remebering who she was. Memori followed him but was stopped once in the academy by a teacher. There Memori explained how she wanted to go inside. After a few questions about her past the teacher would smile and a few mounths later (being it was hard to contact Memori's parents) Memori was happy inrolled into the academy.

Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: "The Kurama clan is a clan of extremely skilled genjutsu users. This talent in genjutsu is due to the unnamed kekkei genkai that the clan possesses. However, once every few generations, a member of the clan will be born with such enormous skill in genjutsu that their illusions can actually produce tangible effects that occur in reality-- This would be Memori. They were originally one of the more prominent clans in Konohagakure, but their numbers have severely dwindled "

Village: Hidden leaf village (currently)

Character Shinobi Rank: Academy student
Jutsus: none yet

[Sasuke's Legacy]

Indeed, I'm not an approver but I can add a helping hand. Though my post will be deleted.

1. The forum name is your profile name on this site. It basically tells us who is commanding the character. So for you it would be Memori.

2. The age is too old. 15 would be about the age of a genin or chuunin. 12 is the age where academy students graduate. So basically 12 or younger. It is a possibility to make her that age so we'll see.

3. Your history is a long and good. But there a few things I think that need to be cleared up. For instance, why is she in the academy at all? And where did she kill this kid? It's not very realistic to have a murdered wandering around in Konoha. The Hokage has a jutsu that tells him who come in and out of the village, so that wouldn't be great.

Also, does her real family have any shinobi background? Are they ninjas? Oh and you can't keep surprises hidden, you have to write it out so people can tell you if it is alright to do that. So in your bloodline, is Memori the girl who gets the extroardinary genjutsu power? If so you need to write that.

4. You have to put the clan and bloodline in the thread for that. Before you can start rp'ing, you must have both the bloodline and the character approved. But another option is that you just don't have one. So post your clan in the fitting thread and we'll see how it goes.

That's all I can see, but it looks okay writing wise. You used lengthy paragraphs which is good and you seem to have a wide arsenal of vocabulary. Good luck!
~SL

[Ycagel]

I think I remember that clan. It was from one of the anime filler arcs, right. Either way, in my opinion that clan was far to overpowered and lame. The inheritor of the bloodline, Kurama, had illusions that were so freaking powerful (Thanks to her bloodline) that they actually produced real effects. Because of her bloodline alone, she was arguably the strongest Genjutsu user in Konoha at the age of twelve. From far away she trapped everyone in Konoha in an illusion, even Tsunade, making them all think that a real lightning hit one of their buildings.

Hell, because of the monster inside of her (Born from her power and emotions), she was a real threat to Konoha, forcing Kurenai to seal her powers away. In other words, I seriously think you should change the clan.

Edit: Jounin-Kakashi said it in a easier way...

[.Muse]

Forum Name: .Muse

Character name: Aburame Shigure

Eye color: Blue

Hair color: Green

Sex: Male

Age: 15

Height: 5'2"

Weight: 42 KG

Blood Type: O

Country of Birth: Konoha

Physical Description: Average height, with jagged black hair and piercing azure blue eyes, hidden by black sunglasses. Shigure wears original Aburame attire; a khaki-coloured coat with a collar hiding his mouth, brown pants and the signature sunglasses.

Personality: Emotionless is a word that describes Shigure perfectly. Emotionless, solitary and collected, Shigure prefers not to stand out. Despite that, Shigure is loved and respected by his family and peers for his sense of humor as well as his sociable attitude.

Likes:
- Bugs
- Training
- Being alone
- Meditating

Dislikes:
- Noise
- Ignorance

History: Soon to come, really busy at the moment.

Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: Shigure was infused at birth with a special breed of insects called destruction bugs that feed on chakra. In return for becoming a living hive, the insects attack opponents, usually while Shigure distracts them, and carry out other tasks as he commands. Shigure has found a number of uses for these bugs, and as such has devised a number of jutsu that utilize them for varying purposes, such as creating copies of himself or using bugs for defensive purposes.

Village: Konohagakure

Character Shinobi Rank: Genin

Jutsus:
Genjutsu Kai: The basic technique of releasing oneself from other people's genjutsu.

Henge no Jutsu: Another basic jutsu, transformation

Kawarimi no Jutsu: And another basic jutsu, the replacement technique.

Bunshin no Jutsu: And another basic jutsu, the copy technique.Kikaichu no Jutsu: A symbol of membership between the 'destruction bugs' and the Aburame clan.

Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu: Shigure uses his bugs to create an exact replica of himself.Mushi Yose no Jutsu: A bug gathering technique, Shigure creates a web-like array of chakra that lures nearby bugs to him.

[Jounin-Kakashi]

New members who are genin only get the 3 basic jutsu's so remove Mushi bunshin and you'll be approved

[Martzu]

Originally Posted by .Muse

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Jutsus:
Genjutsu Kai: The basic technique of releasing oneself from other people's genjutsu.

Henge no Jutsu: Another basic jutsu, transformation

Kawarimi no Jutsu: And another basic jutsu, the replacement technique.

Bunshin no Jutsu: And another basic jutsu, the copy technique.Kikaichu no Jutsu: A symbol of membership between the 'destruction bugs' and the Aburame clan.

Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu: Shigure uses his bugs to create an exact replica of himself.Mushi Yose no Jutsu: A bug gathering technique, Shigure creates a web-like array of chakra that lures nearby bugs to him.

And what about that Genjutsu Kai? Should that be removed as well?

[Jounin-Kakashi]

ah yosh my bad over-looked it, im used to seeing the first 3 to be the normal basic 3... my bad..

[Oirad]

I suggest you make your character 12 if your planning to start with a Genin since he can only have 3 basics jutsu, so that way you don't "lose" 3 years of his life. A 12 year old Geinin with the 3 basic jutsus is fine, he has just graudated after all; a 15 year old Genin whose abilities are on par with a newly graduated is... well...

I'll be deleting this soon ^_^

[UmbraExcessum]

Forum Name: UmbraExcessum

Character name: Excessum De Umbra (Latin, an anagram for ‘Shadow of Death’. The original choice of ‘Excessum’ over ‘Mortis’ for the word death was because Excessum is an adaptation of my Myspace roleplay character, Excessum. Differences being my Myspace character was a Necromancer, his clan slew Vampire and Exorcised Demon. He was mainly set from the manga Hellsing however lived in the Naruto verse ...)

Eye colour: Deep Emerald Green

Hair colour: Green with Red at the Tips of the Hair

Sex: Male

Age: 11 (Still Attending Ninja Academy)

Height: 4”11

Weight: 93 lbs

Blood Type: O

Country of Birth: Earth Country (not in Rock village however)

Physical Description: He usually wears black clothing, fairly pale face with faint red lips looking like he occasionally puts makeup on. He resembles exactly what my avatar is but at the age of 11. (My avatar is 18 years old, the age of my Myspace character, Excessum)

Personality: He is withdrawn; solitary due to his past... However he is very loyal and easy to trust others who show kindness to him. Usually with a strong sense of justice however he does bare a wicked sense of humour and self amusement at times. He cares little for those not close to him although this doesn’t mean to say he wouldn’t help someone out acting on impulse. He cuts himself; however this is partly due to his like of jutsu’s he inherited. He dislikes directly confronting Shinobi with mindless attacks ... rather; he would set himself up so he is guaranteed total success when he decides to attack.

Likes: Sunshine, Sai (daggers), Biology, Cookies (lol), Dogs

Dislikes: Rain, Flamboyant types, Physics, Cats

Nindo: (Optional)???

History: Excessum grew up in a small village made of two joined clans collectively known as Umbra in the Country of Earth. Umbra was separate to the official Hidden village of Rock and far smaller. Although older than the Village of Leaf they were unknown by all but few, and envious they were. Local bandits of the Earth Country that had formed an organised band together made the joint clan their target of taxation. Failing to pay blood money to the bandits Umbra was erased from the face of the Earth Country in a single night. Excessum was 9 years of age at this point. During the attack by the bandits many of the younger Umbra were set to flee whilst elders prelonged their clans impending doom. Of the people who Excessum fled with, only his best friend and his older brother survived the first night. It was thought others of the clan had survived but found refuge in other places. After being turned down at the Hidden Village of Rock for the Umbra’s lack of allegiance to the Earth country, Excessum, his friend and brother travelled to the Hidden Leaf village to make a fresh start. Tragically when travelling through dangerous mountainous area near the boarders of the Rain country and Fire country Excessum’s best friend lost his footing and fell into a fast moving river in the valley blow. Excessum’s older brother had sent Excessum alone to Konoha whilst he quested himself with finding Excessum’s best friend. Now living in Konoha for a year and a half, still with no sign of Excessum's best friend or brother Excessum has joined the Ninja Academy. He has been training their since he was 9 and a half under the instruction of highly ranked Ninja. Unfortunatly Excessum remembers little about his life before the attack on Umbra when he was 9 because of the traumatic stress he had undergone. He wishes to get stronger so he may search for his brother and friend, and possibly any other survivors of Umbra.

Clan Description/ Bloodline Abilities: Excessum Posses a Bloodline ability as well as a unique attacking style of ninjitsu. His bloodline which is unique to the Umbra clan: a now Destroyed clan with only a few surviving members in it (currently assumed to be NPCs but if the clan is accepted they can become spots for people. Currently there are 3 known spots ... and collectively 9, including a leader however these NPCs are not to be revealed until a later time). The bloodline is known as ShadowDancing. It is an original bloodline used by my Myspace character Excessum (who actually doesn’t rely on chakra however accepting its existence as an Ethereal Projection into the Ethereal Plane of existence where one could then apply their ethereal projection to borrow raw elemental power from the inner Elemental Planes of Existence. This setup is much like Dungeons and Dragons 3rd Edition. Excessum and his abilities were built on a Multiverse that he only utilised, for example his ShadowDancing Bloodline he would transverse into the Plane of Shadow temporarily assuming he was completely within a shadow. Inside this plane one can access many other planes where shadow is cast... Time does not exist in this plane however you still age at the same rate as when you entered the plane... Also the more time spent in here creates a disturbing effect over your persona and makes your more vulnerable to Natural light. One can however enter and exit this plane at another shadow nearby, making it seem as if they had instantly jumped from one shadow to another due to a lack of time within the plane of existence.) However for chakra purposes it is altered from its original setup where the user now uses the Shadow as a catalyst for moving at extreme speeds between the current shadows and target one. Both shadows must be large enough for the user to stand in. ShadowDancing also gives the user the ability to sense another’s presence if they are both standing completely within a shadow. The shadows need not be connected. Further to that an advanced ShadowDancer can manipulate the shadow to the point they can form it into solid objects, assuming there is enough shadow for that. If they also force extra chakra into a shadow they may use it to bind to a targets chakra in much the same way Shikamaru’s shadow bind works. They can then bind it to their own chakra or another chakra filled object. It is possible to fabricate shadow using the user’s chakra but the cost of chakra is high. ShadowDancers tend to use a small sacrifice of blood instead as their blood is extremely high in Chakra/per inch of blood cubed. The reason for this is explained below.
The Unique fighting style Umbra uses utilises their extensive research into mixing chakra types together. Their results however didn’t come exactly as planned. Their fighting style consists of two things. Chakra mixing ... and Blood sacrifice. Mixing the blood of freshly felled foes with a specially prepared serum and then applying it to a releasing scroll releases any loose chakra carried by the cells in the blood, as found that red blood cells seem to contain one of the highest amounts of chakra per cell in ratio to any other cell in the body and distribute it throughout the body closely then the chakra highway, replenishing chakra and Oxygen levels at the cardiac organ, the heart where Chakra is supposedly supplied from (according to your guide on Chakra). Upon releasing chakra from the cells it will be dispersed in all directions, a small amount of it falling within the Umbra member. On average only 7% chakra is absorbed into the user whereas the rest goes to waste. The serum helps mix the chakra with other chakra’s before it is released as to not displace any chakra inside the user’s body. Without the serum one would simply be damaging their own body by pushing chakra into it. This extra chakra in general is absorbed into the red blood cells. When sacrificing blood the user is simply sacrificing the extra chakra plus a little of their own so they do not tire from using so much chakra in battle. Their attacks require large amounts of this chakra for any move because otherwise the targets chakra will displace the Umbra’s and the attack would be wasted. To work correctly one must take their own blood, and insert it into the targets blood stream by any means. If they are successful their chakra which is being released by their red blood cells will still be in the user’s control, so they may do specific things to the target using the chakra. Examples are gain knowledge of their vitals right up to stopping their heart from beating, this requiring enough chakra to completely override the targets chakra and very precise chakra control to focus all of the inserted chakra into one place. The user must remember that their attack is time limited... within seconds their attack becomes weaker as chakra is dispersed into the targets body and their own red blood cells are attacked by the targets white blood cells. Also worth noting is Chakra dispersed into the opponents body, once left the users red blood cells MAY empower the target with more chakra to use once again. So speed is essential in this attack as hesitating to follow through with the desired effect of the inserted chakra can tilt a battle for the worse. These unique attacks require the user to be able to take their own blood, and somehow get it inside the targets blood stream. This leaves the user open for attack whilst he attempts this so Shadows are often used to assist in entrapping the target first.

Village: Leaf

Character Shinobi Rank: (Academy Student)

Jutsu’s: (Because Excessum is only an academy student, his Jutsu’s are VERY limited to their full potential ... and they often fail as well. Where Excessum as ACCESS to many many more Jutsu already; his capacity to learn them as of yet limits him to what is stated. Excessum doesn’t know any ‘standard’ Jutsu. His Chakra control currently is poor.)
*Edit* Excessum currently cannot harness his bloodline or Umbra style of fighting. the Jutsu below are what he has been taught thus far by his Clan, however at his level of ability their is no way he can peform any of these techniques. I retain them as an example of his Bloodline and Umbra style of Fighting, and so i dont forget xD

Shadow Sai (To form solid chakra imbued Sai out of Shadow. Can only create one at a time right now. Weaker than most metals)*Unavailable Jutsu At Excessum's Age/Skill. Action Taken Under Moderator Guidence*
ShadowDance (Bloodline ... very poor control over this. Short distance jumps 0-5 meters max)
Manipulate Shadow (As part of the ShadowDancing bloodline Excessum can manipulate shadows around him that are close or in contact. As of yet he cannot do this at all. His only ability to Manipulate Shadow right now lies in his Shadow Sai Jutsu.)
Imbue Shadow (The most Basic of Shadow Manipulation: what experienced ShadowDancing users do subconsciously whilst wasting next to no chakra. Excessum at his level must force chakra into shadow he wishes to use. Only then; when the shadow is empowered with Excessum’s chakra may he perform shadow related Jutsu)
Check Vitals (The most basic of all Excessum’s clan fighting techniques. By taking ones blood, and forcing it though a wound, mouth, skin or eye of a target and allowing ones blood to enter the targets bloodstream; one can gain knowledge of the targets vital health. Including blood pressure, brainwave frequency, pulse rate, blood type, disease etc. How the user interprets this information is entirely different. Due to Excessum’s poor Chakra control, he must ‘sacrifice’ a substantial amount of blood into the targets body to pass enough of his treated chakra inside the other whereas more experienced users may force more chakra into far smaller amounts of blood.)

[Martzu]

I am not the one to approve of reject, but I can tell you that you need to remove the jutsus.

(New members who take a Genin character start with only Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Technique), Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) and Kawarami No Jutsu (Replacement Technique) and in case Academy student is chosen they don't have one)

But you can learn those jutsus in academy so no worries there ^^

Plus you need to get approved your clan/bloodline -> Konoha Mura (Clan/Bloodline Info)