sarah042
Chuunin

Sup Sarah, have you found a new home yet?

yea, no prob I'll check it out.

Added some critiques if you want to check them out.

Lol, now I see where you got the word enthrall for your latest piece haha. At any rate, I commented on one of your latest stories. I'll probably edit short stories more than poetry, many because I hate poetry in general.

Of course it is. Your imagery always manages to enthrall me. Thanks for posting!

I will for sure, and thank you for sharing. I really like your style and creativity, and definitely am interested in reading anything you right =].

Thanks for letting me know and I really like what you did! It's very subtle changes, but overall, enhanced your flow. Good word choice, and again, Sarita just creative and awesome piece. Your talent and aptitude for words is damn impressive!

Hey Sarita! I'm judging the weekly writing contest this week, just like the good ol days. Considering participating? Your writing style always intrigues me, and I think you could do great with the topic.

Thanx, I'd appreciate that.

i never really thought about it
i think the music somthing soft and romantic