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    Sticky: Weekly Writing Contest 89

    On Thursday a topic will be chosen and posted by the previous week's winner. Then everyone who wants to enter will post their piece in the thread before 12:00 PM (-8:00 GMT) Thursday. So that is...
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    Sticky: Re: Weekly Writing Contest 88

    Don't know what happens now that no one submitted anything?
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    Sticky: Weekly Writing Contest 88

    On Thursday a topic will be chosen and posted by the previous week's winner. Then everyone who wants to enter will post their piece in the thread before 12:00 PM (-8:00 GMT) Thursday. So that is...
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    Fanciful Fairy Tales

    Just trying out some new stuff let me know what you think:)

    We all dream, putting words to the wind.
    One day hoping to end the last chapters of our book with love.
    Common is the hidden thought...
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    Re: Weekly Writing Contest 87

    This was something like a desire to be special but if doesn't fit the criteria sorry about that.

    Fanciful Fairy Tales

    We all dream, putting words to the wind.
    One day hoping to end the last...
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    [P] The Morning's Nightmare

    I think it's pretty rough but it's hard to write cohesively when your emotional, but as always suggestion are more than welcome.

    The Morning's Nightmare

    Who ever knew a Tuesday morning could be...
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    Sticky: Re: Anime Recomendations Thread

    Hey guys was wondering if anyone could help me out with finding a good slice of life/ comedy anime.

    I'm a big honey and clover fan lol, so i was thinking about something alone those lines maybe...
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    re: [P] Lost Puzzle Pieces

    thanks again for the praise and suggestion. I wrote this a few weeks ago but after taking a break from it and reading it again after what you said I see where the flow is off. Also after reading some...
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    Re: Weekly Writing Contest 80

    Graze Across the Room

    The gaze across the room.
    Filled with the intent of sin.
    Sinfully curious about the other,
    Curiously sinful likings.

    An intimate first contact.
    Then a second,...
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    [P] Lost Puzzle Pieces

    It's been a while since my last piece. School gets crazy sometimes lol. Tell me what you think any insight would be greatly appreciated again, thanks =]


    Lost Puzzle Pieces


    My puzzle was a...
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    Re: [P] "A Clock"

    Thanks for the comment, I like to write both free versed and structured poems it just depends on what I write about, what best fits the tone and subject sometimes
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    Re: [P] "A Clock"

    Thanks for the comments, it mean a lot to me you have no clue lol. Actually I'm from the Bahamas still pretty close to North American and western ideas and writing styles but, I try to draw from more...
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    [P] "A Clock"

    Another piece I wrote in between school and work. It does have a some what of a significant meaning to me, hope you guys enjoy.

    The clock hangs on the wall,
    Hanging in a void of silence.
    This...
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    Re: [P] "Weakness"

    Thanx for the advice, and i'll be sure to check that section out in the near future =]
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    Re: [P] "Weakness"

    Hey sorry for taking so long to comment back. Thank you for your response and suggestions, I used them when I was trying to fix up this second draft. I really don't have much experience with poetry...
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    [P] "Weakness"

    It might be a little rough because this is the first go

    I feel weak knowing inside I canít hide
    Someone always trying to sneak
    Into my heart into my soul
    Reaching to grab her so bold
    Always...
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