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  1. Thread: [s] 51

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    [s] 51

    Rick Lambert was once a soldier, a dedicated member of the army. That however is now in the past. Now married, and living a normal life Rick believes that his past, is only just a terrible memory....
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Im really liking the character of Miloslav too. At first I was going to dispose of him quickly, but now it seems I can do a whole lot more with him. Here's part 10 of the pilot, in which I wrote a...
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    re: [Play] Revolutionary [MA]

    Stig got to hand it to you man, you really are upping the quality of your script with each section you post. I really want to know who beat up Kelly, seems to me she's dating some sort of renegade...
  4. Thread: Heroes

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    Re: Heroes

    After watching episode 10 of the series, I've come to realize one thing. Heroes has been losing its fizz. Its like a vanilla coke, the first time you drink it it tastes really good. By the third sip...
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    re: [Play] Revolutionary [MA]

    You took a different road with this part. A more intimate road, who knew our big bad revolutionary was getting pussy whipped in his own household. Nice little character detail there. I mean having...
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    Re: [S] The Misfits

    I appreciate all of the comments posted here, all of you people make my day. (Little nod to Eastwood there).

    Anyways here's part 3 of the Pilot episode. I would like to invite old readers, and...
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    Re: [S] The Misfits

    4th Seal your comments are much appreciated. I'm glad you're digging the story so far. I'm also a huge fan of Westerns, especially The Magnificent Seven. About the presentation of the script, I...
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    re: [Play] Revolutionary [MA]

    The second part was brilliant Stig. I couldn't help getting a sort of James Bond vibe from that particular fight scene. The characters haven't been explored yet but somehow I've started to grow on...
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    re: [Play] Revolutionary [MA]

    Got to hand it to ya Stig, this right here is your masterpiece. I'm getting a "Children of Men"/ "12 Monkeys" vibe to this script. I can't wait to read more. The narration is spot on, loved the...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Here is part 9. It is rather small, but I enjoyed writing this part. It gives a lot more character depth to Miloslav and Abram. Miloslav actually gets his turn to shine, with a sort of Shakespearean...
  11. Thread: Fringe

    by MaxVertigo
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    Re: Fringe

    Fringe is a fantastic show. It takes a little bit of the x-files, but just the whole supernatural case and conspiracy theory part, and mixes it up with a little House MD/C.S.I feel. The Bishops are...
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    [S] The Misfits

    In the Wild West a world of Cowboys and outlaws. A man can earn a living in one of two ways, working the land or carrying a gun. That is the rule Clint Shales and his friends live by. They steal from...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Jock, is more like "Jock". lol. It's a nickname, but now that you mention it I might make his real name Jacque.

    Ralph is supposed to bring the outsiders POV to this world, a fresh pair of eyes...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Here's the long awaited 8th part of the first episode. I love what I've written here, which is my first big action sequence.

    EXT. FOREST CABIN- DAY

    The Durango is parked outside of the Cabin....
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Well after 16 hours of plane hopping I'm finally in Shanghai, unfortunately there will still be a slight delay on part 8. Why? Mostly because it is an unpolished version, so it needs to go through...
  16. Thread: True Blood

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    Re: True Blood

    Indeed it does. It being on HBO also means it will have the kind of violence, which vampires require.
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Aside from Joseph, the rest of the gang is pretty normal. That's pretty much what attracts me about the characters, I've read in many places that not a whole lot of mortal people could fight...
  18. Thread: True Blood

    by MaxVertigo
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    True Blood

    The show details the fictional co-existence of vampires and humans in a small Louisiana town after Japanese-made synthetic blood – "TruBlood" – becomes available for purchase. Anna Paquin stars as...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Well the wait might take a day or two. I'll start traveling to Shanghai on Friday, so I might write some stuff up on the flight. The character of Douglas is the gear-head of the team. Also The...
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    Re: The Fast and the Furious 4

    I'll be watching it only for Michelle Rodriguez and Vin Diesel. Those two made the first movie for me. I'm kind of indifferent about Paul Walker, the guy made Into The Blue. Still I wish Tyrese would...
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    Re: [S] Psychiatry

    Arthur's a great character, I loved the:

    ARTHUR (CONT'D)
    So what is this like the Grade Three introduction when I tell them my favorite color, band, and actor? Or should I go the mature way and...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Here's part 7. I managed to write this part, however this is pretty much all I have on my computer right now. The rest is still in my head, and will be written down shortly.

    INT. GARAGE SHOP- DAY...
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    Re: [S] Psychiatry

    Loved the second part. James reminds me of Ari Gold from Entourage now, don't know why. Also I think Arthur is going through a lot of emotional pain, but he seems to hide under sarcastic comments and...
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    Re: Tropic Thunder (POSSIBLE SPOILERS)

    Tom Cruise and RDJ made the movie for me. Tom Cruise was fantastic, though the dancing at the end was a little bit off top. The film was great, a smart comedy that says f*ck you to the movie...
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    Re: [S] Psychiatry

    Amazing script my friend. You have talent for dialogue, it was all crisp, witty and real. I see this as sort of a HBO Drama, like The Sopranos but set in the world of Psychiatrists. Keep bringing on...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    The werewolves are design to be a lot more like the one in the first picture. However each werewolf is unique and different from the others. Certain features of their mortal from are present during...
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    Re: [S] A Wolfs Journey

    You're keeping a classic Disney feel my friend. I like how there's sort of an adult part to the story as well. It is after all a child film script, but it has enough to catch an adults attention....
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    There will be some delays on part 7 since I'm leaving for Shanghai on Friday. Still I might be able to up date bi weekly.

    Also SL.x I'm glad your digging the story so far, who's your favorite...
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    Re: [S] Bloodhunt

    Dog Soldiers is one of my all time favorite films, also Joseph's a sort of auto biographical character. He acts, talks, and likes the same things I do.

    Eric's brother, is important to the story...
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    Re: [S] A Wolfs Journey

    Nice script, reminds me of an Arctic Lion King. It has a sort of Shakespearean feel to it. I would like to see some more. Also if I suggest you write the songs after writing the script, that way you...
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